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| Reviews for Swimming Lessons |
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  Guest 3/24/13 . chapter 1 OMG i love this so much! You're so good at making stories! |
| okikagu 3/12/13 . chapter 1 Altair was cute |
| SonofNaraku 3/10/13 . chapter 1 Me: Note to self... Do NOT let yaoi obsessed girlfriend near computer. It can potentially destroy the image of your semi-favorite game. |
| Killer Pineapple 2/19/13 . chapter 1 I loved this! *O* 3 |
 Noctarial 12/1/12 . chapter 1I loved it :D Please do more :3 |
| Guest 9/29/12 . chapter 1 Woah, wonderful story. You do really well in portraying characters. They do not look awkward or anything. I highly appreciate that. Most of the authors tend to make their stories plain and straight to business (if you know what I mean), whereas your stories are warm and interesting without explicit scenes. I think it's the real talent to create great story by using subtle details rather than obvious image. It makes reader intrigued. And for that I thank you. Your AC stories are really enjoyable to read (all of them) and I dare to hope you will gratify us with some other stories like this in the future. |
| Hollie Novinec 8/22/12 . chapter 1 I loved that story :D I didn't want it to end! Please write another one! I loved it! :D |
| Stillenight 7/6/12 . chapter 1 Once again, amazing work. Poor Altair didn't even know what swimming WAS...Laughed at that scene and when the older assassin was punishing the younger for making moves on him in the middle of the lesson (personally, I can't blame him, I probably would have made an attempt too). My thanks for posting. :) |
| aWalkInCloudz 7/1/12 . chapter 1 Another well-written story having my fav couple made by my adored author :D I like your intelligent way of thinking. Please keep up the good work ! |
| Jeneshisu 6/6/12 . chapter 1 Beautifully written. I could really feel Ezio's concern for Altair's lack of swim skills. |
| Atramentous StygianIron 10/27/11 . chapter 1 Very good. |
| Demonically Angelic Neko88 8/6/11 . chapter 1 ... It was so adorable! I love how you wrote their personalities, it was pretty good. And good job! I can't even count how many times I went 'aww' and 'lols' |
| Assassin Ninja Spy 8/5/11 . chapter 1 awww, Altaïr's scared, childish side really is adorable. Loved this story, it's surprisingly hard to find fanfiction for AC that isn't slash, so this was a nice change |
| Iamaloneinthedark 8/3/11 . chapter 1 I thought this was really good. It's was nice to see Altair's vulnerable side for a change, and they're both so in character :) |
| Ntico25 8/1/11 . chapter 1 I thought this was a good story, there were some misspelled words but all and all good plot. |
