MINE! Noooo THEIRS... Heh I love it! Nice teasing! I really hoped Altair would win or beat Malik but can't take out the stubborn Dai. Also the sweet post-coital-bliss was spectacular! Thank you!

This is, for lack of better words, awesome. One of the best fanfictions I have ever read. Hot and smutty with just the right amount of fluff on the end. Beatiful!

Mother of god... that took me like... four hours to read because i was facebooking and playing mario party at the same time... but ohoh my gawd it was worth it. That was so... pleasant... i guess... and HOT.

As my friend would say, "That makes me moist." he'd probably say that about this. xD

I loved it!

Great job. It was hot and then sweet.

Thomas

This was great!3 The roughsex fitted Malik and Atlair very well, both of them fighting over who topping.. amazing!

I love the ending! It was so sweet and cute to me! c:

very hot and sexy :3 loved it