Like Mione, I am glad that Harry is opening up. You could let him tell part of the story, about preparing for Tom- but not the whole story. I can't wait to see why Luna thought she needed to be a Claw- since the Diadem has been located.

I may not be as exciting as the book me

Harry shouldn't be so sure.

Cute chapter... I love who's been raising Harry...adding Filius is a great addition.

A Gryffindor Luna would have been an interesting character.

So it looks like the crew will be Harry, , Neville, Ginny and Luna (plus the twins).

On with the story!

Love ya

Mae

Please no Harry and Ginny. Besides, 12 years old boys are too young to think of girls as good looking.

If this is different direction, I really hope you don't pair Harry with Ginny. Either way, it's interesting so far.

I like how this is shaping up. I imagine there will be some interesting confrontations between Harry and Draco's crew. And as time passes by, a developing friendship with Ginny and Luna.

Much better. We have background and a story. Please hurry the next chapter along.

Very good.

i loved it.i can't wait for more.

Thank you! Just what I needed. It is going to rain soon and the humidity has me stiff as a board! :(

JimS

Yay, we have a Luna contact!

Flitwick? Cool!

Alan

i loved it.i think the title is in reference to a song,but i may be mistaken.i can't wait for more.

wow a whole year in one chapter. i am ambivalent as to how i feel about it

I hope it's Sirius Black who is raising Harry.

Good start but a little short.