 mjmusiclover 5/21/12 . chapter 13truly beautifully well written and done, i truly love this fic :D |
 blueflower1594 5/19/12 . chapter 13I love how vegeta is do concerned about Bulmas feeling towards his betrayal, and he's nor even thinking about what Nappa feels wherever he is! Update soon please! |
 ScorpionChick 5/17/12 . chapter 13I love this story : ) , the couple vegeta and bulma are just so adorable, very interesting story you have. |
 Cara2012 5/15/12 . chapter 13No Veggie! Bring Nappa back! You wuv him X3 |
 queen of magicians 5/15/12 . chapter 13Dont you just love fan art...hint hint...coming soon lol |
 WithoutWingsX 5/15/12 . chapter 13I LOVE IT! That's not a rare complement because i pretty much love everything I read, but still, I really love this story! Please update soon, and good job on making bulma so sneaky, it kinda reminded me of Videl and gohan |
 Haku Namikaze 5/15/12 . chapter 13Woo! An update! I liked it a lot! |
 KaterinaRoos 5/15/12 . chapter 13Awesome chapter! I love the way you depict Vegeta in such a prideful and tender way. Update soon! (: |
 FireStorm1991 5/15/12 . chapter 13He should just decide to wish Nappa back. I mean, he could always wish to beat Frieza a year from then, and then he would stop having nightmares :/ |
 f 5/15/12 . chapter 13 another good chapter, keep it up. |
 KimiruMai 5/15/12 . chapter 13Aww, poor Veggie. Nightmares are a bitch. Is he gunna try to wish back his whole race? |
 queen of magicians 4/13/12 . chapter 12Wow this is a great story...imagining fan art art designs...hmmm...its been a while but I'm getting "mused" |
 Lavonya 3/23/12 . chapter 12Nappa Over Imortality! |
 ideanumber18 3/8/12 . chapter 12Excellent story, I'm really not usually a fan of this genre of fanfiction, but stupid me have I been missing out or what! ( face palm ).
Purely the mental image of Nappa wearing an apron and doing domestic chores had me sucked in XD, love it!
Your pacing and setting of the scenes plus the teenage angst was very good, it felt very natural and not contrived in any way. |
 TheScarletNinja 3/7/12 . chapter 12This story is really getting interesting. Keep up the good work. _ |