Waaaa, you broke my heart with the words "my best friend", haha.

I can't...

But this was good :) there were some mistakes, but I like that he went to her for comfort, and I think that ever since that Swan Song hug, this would be pretty in character.

It's nice!

Soph

More Stories plz!

I want them to get together...but in the state Tony is at that would not be a good idea right now...maybe you can write a sequel where Ray leaves Ziva, she goes to Tony for comfort, and they slowly realize their feelings for each other are true love :)

Really nice story Elisha:D

A little sad bad very,very have great writing skills:D

Looking forward for more3