Nice idea for an ending. I kind of wish that had been the big finale. Better than Buffy's pointless self-sacrifice bit. Good story.

Its well written, although I can definitely tell its one of your earlier works. I like the idea of Spike biting Dawn and going through the portal in her place but I think bringing him back was a bit too happy ending-ish and didn't make sense either.

I guess I just prefer Joss.

Nice attempt.

Excellent story. Too bad it couldn't have really ended like that.

Terrific spin on the end of season 5. Liked it alot The reactions were beleiveable and the story worked well.

Good job.

Really sweet and moving :) Loved the dialogue, esp. in the end, that was wonderful!

OlgaB

Awww, that was sweet.

And very well written too.

awww beautiful!

that was a really clever idea, with the whole spike drinking dawn's blood - very cool!

and at the end, with the coat thing - adorable much! *swoon*

Now I'm just going through and reviewing all your stuff, even if I have already read them. You do the characters really well. The voices are pretty dead on and I think the development is great. Keep it up.

Shame it did'nt really end like this.

Much better than the real ending of "The Gift". And no tears at the end this time. *sigh*

Why couldn't you be Joss?

Very cool story. Loved the idea, loved your discription, and you made me cry!

I luv it. If only this was the way it really went. Are ya thinking bout a sequel at all? Cuz I think it would be an awesome idea!