Great one shot. I love it. You should consider writing a longer MWPP/L. 9 out of 10.

great, short fic

That was Great!

Cool story! Will we get more?Anyway, too many time gaps, it was hard to read because you kept writing At dinner, at classes, after break, ext. You should have wrote what happened in those time breaks. Also, there was almost no dedescription. Why did you have Lily and James as being head boy and girl? It sort of messed up some of your main points. I mean James would have never done that stuff if he was head boy. And when Lily thought they were up to something, they would have told her, she wouldn't have droped out of the conversation that quickly anyway. If you are wondering who I am, I an Lotesse's little sister. You really should read her stories. She writes HP stories as well as Lord of the Rings stories. Back to your story now, it was Spifferific!

four flying monkeys? .:cracks up laughing:. this deserves a kirby!

Nice job on the story.

HAHAHA! LOL, Graciela

That was REALLY good! I love mwpp prank stories.. but a lot of them turn out to be REALLY stupid... but yours wasn't.. I loved it! That is one of the best pranks I've seen anyone come up with. You should do more mwpp stories cause ur really good! I think I said that already though. LOL. Great job!

Flying Monkeys! That's a good description!

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Hilarious! i love it!

you are soooo funny! all your stories leave me laughing! keep writing!

i loved it!

Oohh.. this one was not only hilarious but written very well. I love it :)