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Dani4ever
2009-02-07 . chapter 1
WOW I really liked it
great work! keep it up :D
AriesPrincess-Slyffindor
2006-09-02 . chapter 1
omg omg i luv it
Wet Water Witch
2005-12-22 . chapter 1
I lurv Ron-Hermione! I love your fic!
Iliana Elizabeth
2005-12-02 . chapter 1
OMG! The moment I read, "‘Yes, do it,’ she urged herself.

And then she kissed him.", the climax of "Collide" by Howie Day played on the radio. It couldn't have been more perfect! XD Okay, seriously I loved it-I love fluff in general, but I don't know if this warrented an immediate teeth-brushing; more like a breath mint. :-)

Keep writing! --Iliana Hermione--
hoopla92
2005-09-25 . chapter 1
that was so...(tear rolling)...beautiful(sniffs)
i loved that it was sweet and romantic.
xo, nai
cucu4cocopuffs
2005-05-21 . chapter 1
aw...that was so sweet and innocent. one of the best fics ive read in a long time.
M. K. Slade
2004-08-08 . chapter 1
You are so rgiht. Why can't life be this way? Why can't it be like it used to? Why can't your crush be so sweet and romantic as Ron in all R/Hr fluffs?
I guess thats what dreamings for.
Anyway...I just LOVED it. But then again what R/Hr fluff do I not? Well...yours was REALLY good.
J. S. Writer
2004-04-10 . chapter 1
Aww...That was so beautiful! It's making me cry! (Well, sorta.) Wonderufl story!
Yami boy
2004-02-28 . chapter 1
¡__¡ How cute. I loved it, hehe. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the good work. ^__^
timebomb87
2004-01-06 . chapter 1
wow..That was so great! Emotion just POURS out of it! Truly incredible! I love mushy fluff! :P
And I totally see where you're coming from when you said in your a/n "why can't real life be this way?" oh man..I wish. I've always dreamed of a love that will simply take my breath away, leave me trembling, make me cry...all that grand stuff. I'm starting to doubt it's existance. I've been kissed by people whom I care about so much; Who mean the world to me. But there's never that spark. That feeling that you're supposed to get where you feel absolute, complete contentment. Your ficlet made me feel, for even just a second, that maybe there is hope after all :P :)
*someday my prince will come..*
Rebekah vanEttinger
2003-11-11 . chapter 1
I loved it! It didn't make me sick at all! You did a great job on making the reader feel the emotions the characters we're going through. It was very well written, and I felt as if I myself were Hermione. Very well written!

2003-08-20 . chapter 1
that actually didn't sicken me. i thought it was nice.
WHA!
How come I can look like Hermione, act like Hermione, speak with an "accent" I guess it would be described as, but it's completely natural, but I can't be Hermione? I want to have the perfect boyfriend like she has! I want someone like Ron! Are my standards to high?

okay,
I completely,
totally,
and utterly
LOVE your work!
star
2003-07-30 . chapter 1
the girl takes the initiative, typical! i like it very much!
Straycat1
2003-07-13 . chapter 1
nicely done , it's very sweet! *sighs*
Kayah - Not Signed In
2003-06-05 . chapter 1
omg... think I'm going to cry! That's so beautiful and sweet...where's my boyfriend when I need him? Ehehe, you're fantastic at writing. I really love this story ^^
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