Aww...the ball matters. This is so simple it's amazing: he can't cross the line. Poor thing. Great story, happy writing :)

YO, THAT WAS GOOD...really good.

i was a bit surprised, mainly because i couldn't imagine how someone could write a love story for Pong. but i was also surprised at how entertaining and good it was. the only complaint i have is that the whole thing about hair, clothes, and hands did humanize it, and that kinda ruined the image i had for it, but otherwise it was quite good.

I stumbled upon this and wasn't quite sure what to expect. It's a curious little drabble, and an idea that's been used many a time over in various fandoms, but I like it overall. Except for the one part about clothes and hands which I think humanized them a bit too much and sort of shattered the image I had going on, it was well executed.

In short, I liked it. Well done.