meh... i have seen worse first stories... this ones actually not that bad, it just needs details like the prologue for example

I ran through the woods, the rain beat down on my thick fur. It was a frigid night, but I was warm because of my fur. (in italics) I, am no longer human (end italics), I thought as I ran on. It was not ill recently that I was human no longer. But a werewolf. I stopped st some point I do not know when, and howled my sorrow to the high heavens.

Hold on. You all probably do not know what I am Blabbering on about. Right now you probably think I should be in a psyche ward. Well then let me start from the beginning.

also do not for get to separate thought and talking like so

"bleh"

"bleh" (talking)

use italics for thoughts, dreams, letters that sort of thing

This is exactly like the movie! Show some originality!

I enjoy the stream of consciousness approach from Jordan's POV. Very minimalist, but still engaging. I want to write a fic for this movie someday.

Good story! I hop you dont have forgotten this story. Please Update! What an Amazing story.

Not bad just need to add little more details. Love the story so far.

I really like the movie and this story is great pleas continue because I check back everyday to see if you updated so don't give up. If you have writters block than write a one shot for any catogory to get those creative juices flowing. Bye:)

Weird...the only Boy who cried werewolf fic... god start though i wanna see where ur going to lead it. 3