Nice job of catching Kelly's inner workings.

S:)

Again, Alucino, a wonderful piece! Smart, open, engaging... you get the characters spot on... I am enjoying all of your stuff here! Thanks so much for sharing! But please do write more when you can because you are very talented - i don't think i could write 1st person, it takes some skill, i think! Well done matey! :-))

i liked it. very kellyish. im enjoying these little short stories from you. keep it up maybe?

Yeah, I'm one of those who's not for firt-person POV stories most of the time, but yours are well done and enjoyable to read. Good job! :)