| Reviews for After The Concert |
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niyahhill13 4/10/13 . chapter 8i love baek hae and i like the kiss they really close in real life like they did so things behind doors 333 |
Carmen 3/14/13 . chapter 9 Love this :) |
tilsou 3/9/13 . chapter 4 It's really nice because u know how too lead the storyline maybe we'll have the right to a third season thanks to u lol ( it'll be certainly better than the 2nd) but what hye mi is doing is kind of getting of my nerves, she's playing with their feelings; Sam dong has gone only for her and when he's coming back she's acting strange ! |
tilsou 3/9/13 . chapter 1 Thank u so much for this sequel after the end of the drama in 2011 i was thinking like it was missing something but with ur fic it's gonna rock ! |
Guest 3/7/13 . chapter 1 Very good ;P |
randomfreakgirl 1/15/13 . chapter 9Love it! |
Guest 9/12/12 . chapter 21 I enjoyed the story till U killled Song sam don and did all that weird stuff... Your story had good potential untill that for me... I wish i stopped reading:( |
TaecZy 7/6/12 . chapter 1my second time reading because i really liked it |
Guest 6/27/12 . chapter 8 your writing is really good |
Taeczy 3 5/13/12 . chapter 21 so loove this where will you upload the "milk and honey" i'm looking forward to read it anneyong... |
Guest 5/13/12 . chapter 21 where are you goin to upload it? and by the way i really really like this story cuz i really like hye mi and jin guk to end up together... kamsamnida |
Craux 5/11/12 . chapter 21'Sup? Anyways, this is my first and last review to you so I'll make this count. I always did find the ending of Dream High being annoying, with Hye Me being paired with Song Sam Dong when the first part of the story was that she and Jin Guk were meant to be together. They had a HISTORY. They met each other when they were young and shared a memory. It seemed like they were fated to be as lovers, not as friends. While as Song Sam Dong seemed to be one that destined to be just friends. I don't know the author of the story made that ending but... meh. Anyway, point is I feel the need to thank you for making a story of Jin Guk and Hye Mi being together. Now, on to the story itself. I'm sorry, although I thank you for creating the story, I need to tell you something. It might seem harsh but I want you to be better at writing stories. The story, was weak. It was bland, had an uninteresting plot and the dialogue was weak. You must show, not tell. That was the reason why it seemed too bland for me. You were also rushing the relationship, so that was a turn off for me as well. And the dialogue. You need to improve on that, it seemed so out place sometimes and a bit awkward. I suggest you read things off of the internet and practice. Look, I'm sorry if I offended you. You could just dismiss this away and think that it's just a stupid flame - which is not- or you could learn from this and be a better writer. |
HyemiSamDong 5/4/12 . chapter 8 Oh no. :((( This chapter really made me sad. I liked your first seven chapters, not until I have read this. Baek Hee and Sam Dong? This is going too far. Honestly, it gave me a shock. I never expected how things turned out. Tsk. Breaks my heart, seriously. |
KyeoptaYeonie 4/11/12 . chapter 21Wow! I'm so surprised you're actually writing a sequel! :D But, of course, I'm also very thrilled! I like the beginning already I can't wait to read more 8D I love the original cast of Dream High so much *.* |
Gela 4/9/12 . chapter 20 This was the sequel I was waiting for, for the actual show. It was brilliant and I didn't want it to end. But alas, everything must. It was wrapped up well though and I commend you for that. I love how you use Korean words (most of, I don't really know the meaning) and the point of view technique was very clever! :) I was still half expecting, half hoping that Sam Dong and Hye Mi would end up together, somehow, but I don't mind this ending either. I always thought that this was how it was going to end for the actual show, so it's nice to have my predictions realised. ;) If you are thinking of writing a sequel to this, I hope you'd write more about the Sam Dong/Baek Hee and Jason/Pil Suk pairing. That'd be just the cherry on top of this amazing storyline. Good luck. :) |