CUTE i know should porbably write more but this is so adorable, please write more sirius/hermione stories! please!

no offense or anything, but, i thought this was supposed to be rated M, lol...so far its only been T, and there's only 5 chapters left...is going to be M in the 5 chapters, or are you changing it to T? lol

Aw this story was so sweet!

aw, so glad every think worked out for them!

I really enjoyed reading this story xx

not bad good job

I liked it a lot. How ever it still raises the question about why Harry and Ron liked the smell of each other. Hiding a secret or somesouch wo knows. Great fic.

This story was quite cute. The concept was really great. The execution left a little to be desired. My biggest peeve is dialogue and it not being realistic to the characters and I think your Sirius dialogue was a little off. Also, watch little spelling and grammatical errors like changing tense in the middle of a sentence or leaving off a letter at the end of a word. Also, it's a cesarean section. Really good attempt, but not perfect execution.

You keep randomly calling Hermione's mother Mrs Weasley. Pretty good fic though so far.

This was am amazing story. i absolutely loved it!

well done :)

hope u update soon.

we! fun!

Aw. I love it.

I really like this story!
Even if it is a bit fluffy without many problems for HG/SB. One thing I noticed. Sometimes in the middle of a chapter it was a few months or even years later. It would be easier to read if you have separated those parts with a line or whatever.
E.g. the pregnancy of Mrs. Granger was a bit confusing. One chapter she was still in the second month, one chapter she was giving birth...

I do think that last line from this chapter is from "Casper." I really like your story so far it's really cute

good story
it was nice to see the story though at some places it did become weak
i still had fun reading it