Very hot!

Talking *is* overrated. ;)

Kisses are one of the hardest things to write, but you've done it so well here. It fits in well with the first chapter, and again, it is very sexy. I've written about Elsie's high collars before too! They are most annoying and Charles needs to think of several ways to get them off! :)

*Finally* starting to read some of the fics here. I adore the details of Charles's hands. And, of course, all the inappropriate thoughts they bring (to me, as well as Elsie). The gripping the back of her neck line was very sexy. Off to the next chapter!

I read the story about Elsie's new dress first and I loved how this was its own story, but in the same vein as hers. They are such a wonderful couple and you wrote them very well! Thanks for sharing!

You writing is beautiful! Very realistic. I don't normally beg but please, please, please write another chapter!

Guh. No coherency at all right now. Love it!

If only this could happen on the series. I love this couple so much. Thank you for making them happy together.

You are doing such a good job on your storylines. I'm hoping that the "pause" on this particular story is because your "Last Will and Testament" was just dying to be written and that you'll return to this one to continue. It could also be that, with this story, you've opened the door to a more intimate look at the charachters and I know that can sometimes be VERY hard to write. I would just like to encourage you to continue because so far...you've done an excellent job.

*As he kissed her, he trailed his hand to her shoulder and down to her bottom to draw her to him, wishing all the while that there was no stiff black dress between his hand and her skin* - very sensuous without being cheap and cheezy!

And I definitley want to know if/when/how they determine for sure whether or not *talking is over-rated*...LOL! ;-)

Another great chapter. I'm loving fic so much. More please.

Gosh, how flattering is that? To have such a great fanfic written about my fanfic! Your characterisation was excellent, and I found it very funny, I was laughing right from the first sentance, particularly when she said that men were always to blame. I thought that was very Mrs Hughes. I would absolutely love it if you continued this.

OMG wonderful idea. Thank you so much for sharing. Fanfic from a fanfic (that was awesome) is just brilliant. I want more!

oh my, that was lovely! Beautifully done. Should you be compelled to continue, I would not be adverse. ;)