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RavynSkye 4/27/13 . chapter 20 Awwwwww... Please don't let this be the end of the story! I'm DYING to see more Lindsay/PuppeXHeiter moments! I hope that there will be more, if not posted here to ffnet, then posted elsewhere, like adultfanfiction or ArchiveOfOurOwn or MediaMiner...? |
the-dark-poetess-911 3/30/13 . chapter 20Okay so this story is officially one of my favorites on this entire site! I am really enjoying how you're not only developing Dr. Heiter's character, but Lindsay's as well. I particularly enjoyed not only this chapter but that fact that you somehow made this totally unbelievable situation... realistic. Keep up the amazing writing and I sincerely hope you update a new chapter soon. :) |
xasylumx 3/28/13 . chapter 20great story, keep going |
Darcy 3/24/13 . chapter 20 OH please, please please update soon! The writing in this story is fantastic, and I can't wait for the next update! And Puppe on Codeine is one of the best things around! lol |
akatsukicrazy 2/17/13 . chapter 20wow. this is really good. not cheezy, not going too fast. you're a very talented writer. please do continue :) |
The Eclectic Eccentric 2/7/13 . chapter 20At first I was like "I cannot believe I'm about to read a Heiter/Lindsay fanfic... what the hell am I thinking?" But I take back, I take it all back. Your story is well written, the characters are believable, and I'm deeeeeefinitely rooting for "Puppe" and the good doctor to have sex... soon. So basically, keep up the good work and I can't wait for your next update! |
SukiR 1/31/13 . chapter 20Yay! A new chapter, and it was definitely worth the long wait :) I love the inner conflict Heiter's having. Hopefully he'll get over his shyness :p it'll be interesting to see how he handles watching her, and how he actually manages to choose one for her. Can't wait for your next chapter, keep up the good...no...wonderful work :) |
StrangeKindOfMirror 1/31/13 . chapter 20You certainly make the long wait worth while, don't you? I hope the next chapter will come sooner but as long as it is as good I suppose I'll manage ;) |
Delenaluver 1/31/13 . chapter 20love it, update soon! |
Ravyn Skye 1/29/13 . chapter 19I love this chapter! It's a much needed comedic break... AND, one must remember that Lindsay is 'high', but that only means that her INHIBITIONS are lowered... she's acting more of how she would like to act, if she weren't being inhibited by other factors. I sent you a PM with further ideas for the next chapter/s, and I HOPE you will update! This story is one of the highlights of my days, and I love to see each new chapter. I'm so worried that you haven't updated in quite a while. I can only hope and pray that my PM and ideas inspire you! I would be devastated if this story were to stop at this point! Oh, and PLEASE show Heiter trying to figure out which kind of vibrator to give Lindsay. That could be SOOOOOOO funny! (And also, since she doesn't have any privacy anyway... it could be fun if... well, maybe Lindsay says she's too shy to do it to HERSELF while he's in the room so... He already changes her diaper, her tampons... Can't he just maybe... be the one to use it on her, instead? She'll tell him how to do it... PLEASE? I can't do it myself, in FRONT of you! But... *thinks* It would be so nice to have a moment of pleasure, after so much pain...) Of course, him giving her that pleasure would also help her stockholm syndrome, because when women orgasm, oxytocin (A bonding chemical) is released in their brains. Orgasms help women to feel 'bonded' to the man who gave it to them. It's just brain chemistry. Heiter, as a doctor, would know this... and he might see it as a way to ensure that his pet never tries to escape again and maybe eventually... she won't even WANT to LEAVE him? Then, he won't ever have to worry about being lonely again... ANYWAY I'M RAMBLING AGAIN! Go read my PM and PLEASE respond and let me know what you think of those ideas, and this one. Hearts and Hugs, RS PS - If you don't want to post some things here on ffnet, can you maybe make a tumblr or adultfanfiction dot net account, to post more graphic sex scenes? (Not that you really have to worry. This is a small section that almost no one really visits, and anyone who is a FAN of those movies is going to be old and mature enough to read sex scenes without OMG REPORTING them. ;) ) |
StrangeKindOfMirror 12/17/12 . chapter 19I'm really enjoying this story and how it is progressing, particularly the fact that you are keeping the characters believable. My only concern is how long it's been since you've updated; it would be shame if this story fell victim to the eternal WIP section. I hope the muse strikes you again soon, keep up the good work. |
Delenaluver 12/9/12 . chapter 19love it, update soon! |
SlenderXLover 11/14/12 . chapter 19YAY! I loved it sooooo much! This is my FAVOURITE story EVER! |
ThornWolf the Loyal 11/10/12 . chapter 19Codeine does the same thing to me...And it's AWESOME! And when I could sleep, I got the coolest dreams. |
Amy 11/9/12 . chapter 19 Heehee this chapter was funny ;) You did an outstanding job, once again. Please update ASAP! :D |