Please keep going! Write more and update soon! :)

I really like it- very different and it has many possibilities!

i hope there is a sequel.

oh my god, i cracked up at the spanish insults, im puertorican, im a latina and proud! considering i know what the insults mean, hehe, it made everything funnier.

This was interesting.

Wow, utterely brilliant story! I just loved reading about a young Severus life and the reasons why he decided to runaway. I mean what had he got to stay for, well least according to a young child's view. I mean no one likes to compared to their peer, and told why couldn't they be like them. But I think the worst part was Sev overhearing his mother saying she'd wished she'd never married his father and had Sev. But I do think that the time Sev spent in the muggle world allowed him to learn about himself although he did learn a lot about the muggle world and even made friends. However the death of Javier probably had a negative impact upon Sev's views of muggles in general. Will you be writing a sequel to this great story? As I'd like to know what happened when Sev returned to hogwarts and his reunion with his parents?

Wow! That was really good!

Oh my god. This story moved me. I don't know what to say. Hmm

i thought that was really sad i was almost crying, your story fits in so perfectly with the cannon it's really crazy...i don't really like the fact that sev is a vampire, because JKR never mentions it in the books...oh well it is a fanfiction for a reason,

keep writing,

Wow, this is really good! I love the young!Sev fics!

I thought your story was great! it ends really abruptly though, i'd love to see the effects of Sev's returning to Hogwarts and such. PLus, wouldn't it be nice if Jen , when she turned 11, got a letter from Hogwarts? :)

Hi!

I've just read your fic, it's great. I love it, please keep on writing the sequel!

Lovely, lovely story. I loved your portrayal of young Severus and I can relate to why he became what he did, i.e. muggle murderer if the his exposure to them was so horrible. If you are doing a sequel, have you decide on a time frame? Will it be in present day Hogwarts with Severus meeting up with his street friends again or maybe during the summer of his next year, when he is still a child? Both appeal, and I can't figure out which to beg for. So, please, please, I would love to read the sequel.

Atheis: NOOO! I CAN'T BELIEVE I ALMOST MISSED THIS! *kicks computer and scolds the cable for not working and being gone for over a week* Well anyways! I think I shall review now after all this is one of my favourite stories!

Aeris: We already missed that last few chapters too... And now... *sniffle* Poor pup! Sequel! Yes you must do a sequel or a prelude er whats it called... epilude..

Atheis: Dolt... It's epilogue.

Aeris: I knew that! *grins sheepishly*

Atheis: As I was saying before Aeris so rudely inturrupted me... I do think that a EPILOGUE is a good idea... to see Sevie once he's back at school and kicking Marauder Hineys! ( Hopes that is spelt right) *nods* yup!

Aeris: And shes complaining about my spelling errors... when she can't spell worth crap.

Atheis: My crap or yours?

Aeris: Why?

Atheis: Because mine is worth more than your obviously.

Aeris: You are sick.

Atheis: *cough cough* It's just a biddly cough! Nothing to fret over.

Aeris: Not that way you retard.

Atheis: One has to be more specific if one is to make it through the world.

Aeris: Pacific huh? *transforms into a body of water* Blurble blurble blurble?

Translation: How's this for Pacific?

Atheis: SPA-cific! Dolt!

Aeris: *tries to transform but is stuck as liquid man* Blurble!

Translation: Woman!:

Creator of Atheis and Aeris: Whoops sorry...

Atheis: What's up with that? It's like its god or something...

Aeris: Blurble...

Translation: Yeah hit the submit review button so we can go and strip tease for Snape and mayb-

Aeris: BLURBLE!

Translator: Whoops sorry got my translation mixed up with a different review... You said 'Yeah' right? And this other guy said... Ok so sorry...

Atheis: Looks like Aeris needs a new translator.

Aeris: Blurble blurble...

Translator: How wude! I am not a- I am not going to even mention it! Such a child should not be premitted to speak such language of the Adult Conspiracy. *changes the rules*

Aeris: *&%%$! Blurble? &&%$%$#!

Translator: There no more cussing for you.

Aeris: *&%$ &&%$ $%$%#!

Atheis: Haha you suck &*%! Dangit Me too?

Translator: Yes. Bye bye. *vanishes*

Atheis: This is a load of pish posh! *hits submit review button*

This is great! I finished it in all in one read and am looking forward to the sequel. :)

Could you write a sequel? For me pppllleezzzeee