|Reviews for Brothers contamiNated|
| Arysthae 11/25/12 . chapter 3
This is a very interesting story! I can't wait to read more! Beyond and Near teaming up is certainly novel.
| Rachel 9/2/12 . chapter 2
I love this!
| AkaneSukishima 2/29/12 . chapter 3
Please update soon, I absolutely love the way you portray Beyond. He is my favourite Death Note character because of his behavior, ideals and actions.
I love what you are doing, keep it up, and i want to see an update soon!
| TheDanaDobreAKAToshiroLover 2/28/12 . chapter 3
I'm not entirely sure as to why there are only 4 reviews on this story... because I believe that this deserves a whole lot more than it is getting at the current moment. I love how, in your writing, you portray every character perfectly as well as draw me in with the dialogue. What you write actually makes you sit and think; basically, it's very deep. But I actually like that about this story. I'm especially looking forward to seeing how the plot progresses. You definitely have achieved my vote. I cannot wait until your next chapter, so continue on with the good word!
The only thing that I noticed about the was the small grammatical errors, particularly with the R in your, making it You. It happens at least twice, if I'm not mistaken.
| Derpkins 2/25/12 . chapter 3
Oh! Near and BB one of my characters. Is Near gonna go phsyco in this cause that will bbe interesting. (Sorry for bad grammar because I'm writting this on my kindle)
| Type069 9/14/11 . chapter 2
Interesting, as your stories tend to be. Factoring in the B you fleshed out in "What's My Name?" as well as the B we see in Another Note, makes for an interesting alternate plot. I'm looking forward to following this story.
I only noticed a few grammatical errors, nothing that threw off the story.
| last place 8/2/11 . chapter 2
Unfortunately I can't read the entire second chapter at this moment, but the first chapter...oh my god I can't even begin to describe how much i enjoyed it. Not only did you construct a profound meaning, but your writing is clear, interesting and full of great analogies. Absolutely fantastic. I couldn't get enough of the first chapter and I can't wait to finish the second.
I love that you've taken a place that many DN fans believe to be all good and morph it into a corrupt prison. You thouroughly gave subtle, yet powerful, reasons why B became a murderer. Your tone creates contradicting feelings of pity and hatred for him. I'm literally appalled by how impressed I am with a fanfiction.
Keep up the good work. You've definitely got me hooked. I'll finish reading the secondchapter as soon as possible.
| terribleramen 8/2/11 . chapter 2
Interesting idea you have here. No reviews that I can see, though highly deserving of them. I admire your writing style, and I enjoyed reading both posts. I'm eager for more, the plot seems nice.
You write both B and Near so well, and the splash of Mello at the end was just perfect. I do wonder if there will be much L in this? The way you described the orphanage was great. I have a very detailed mental view of it, myself. You really had every aspect of the place in there. It really is such a haunted and tragic place. It's no wonder the orphans all seem to have something wrong with them. B and Near, their characters together like this is something I thoroughly enjoy.
I look forward to future updates, this is such a good idea. I've never subscribed to a story before, but this just fascinates me. So, continue soon, okay? Okay.