Interesting. I think you can leave it at T-nothing graphic, as you said. Did not see this coming! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I like how you started out this story apologising for not being Canadian. Due to the vast amount of American television shows I watch that often speak badly of my country, I found it hilarious. Good job with the story so far, it's really well written.

Ooh, drama _ I really got in to this chapter, sympathizing with Kira. I'm guessing that, in her dealings with Will, she's digging herself further into a hole that she'll have to climb out of before this fic is over. Looking forward to the next chapter!

i quite like it actually. I'm hopinh she opens up to Spike, i love Spike so i'm all for a Spike/OC. Anyways, cheers on the story!

This is shaping up to be a pretty good story! You'd better keep writing, because now I'm hooked! :D

Now for the guesses...

Keira has skeletons in her closet, and I want to know what they are! Something to do with her step-father, maybe?

As well, her relationship with Spike... hasn't really been played out, but I'm anxious to see whether (in the end) she goes for Spike or Will... (I'm rooting for Spike just because he's my favourite character :D)

Thanks for writing this intriguing story! I can't wait to read more and find out if my musings are true... *evil grin*

-Harper

I find I'm seriously invested in these characters. I want to know what the hell Kiera was doing and why she disappeared. Always wouldn't mind hearing Jason's justification for keeping it all a secret. I'm super excited to read more!

Intersting story, like how you brought outside characters in. Can't wait for the rest of the story!

Great chapter. I'm loving Keira's character so far and how you've fit her in team one. Everyone was in character; it felt as if I was watching an actual episode.

And the Power Rangers reference-haha.

-Nina

Well that was quite enjoyable. I get a little antsy about OC's sometimes because they have the tendency to be Mary Sue and not very well rounded, but you've done an excellent job with Keira so far. Looking forward to seeing the drama and tension with the rookie.

Enjoyed the Pink Ranger jab - bahahaha.

I'm interested to see what kind of personal story you have planned for Kira :) Just a note: in the first two chapters you repeated her circumstances quite a bit. We understand by now that she's very private and is afraid of her past coming out.

Well...isn't this ramping up? Love the intrique you've managed, can't wait to find out what Keira's hiding. Thanks for sharing.

Wow this is really good. i like how you have kiera holding back revealing too much at a time could be a bad thing. i like how you just jump right into the story. its a good way to grab someones attention. keep up the great work and i cant wait to read more! :)

Wow this is really good. i like how you have kiera holding back revealing too much at a time could be a bad thing. i like how you just jump right into the story. its a good way to grab someones attention. keep up the great work and i cant wait to read more! :)

Great start, great writing style. Looks really promising and I am looking forward to learning more about Keira and her background. Hope you update soon.

I really like where you're going with this. I want to see what Keira's hiding and I really want to see how the team reacts to it. I get the feeling that Greg knows more than he's letting on, I get the feeling that not much gets by him. Can't wait for more, thanks for this!