|Reviews for Breathe|
| DreamCatcher1991 3/21/12 . chapter 22
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
| DreamCatcher1991 2/28/12 . chapter 21
It seems like a great chapter, I don't know what you think you didn't like.
| ilovemedia18 2/27/12 . chapter 21
Still going to say it... GIVE ME SPIKE! I want her with Spike! A real relationship WITH Spike. You're killing me! (in a good way)
| AuntMingy 2/27/12 . chapter 21
Liked this chapter, wondering who is going to figure out everything first...Will or Spike (I think Spike) But the beginning really made me think, that with all of Keira's past problems, how she managed to mask it for so long?
| apsta 2/17/12 . chapter 20
DYING for the next update. I prefer this story to the actual Flashpoint story line... Good on you! Super talented. Amazingly well written characters.
| Cassandra S. Fisher 2/15/12 . chapter 20
Wow, I have to say this story is pretty good. It has my attention. I can not wait until the next chapter comes out. I like the chemistry between Will and Keira. Keep up with this exciting story.
| mermers 2/11/12 . chapter 20
Great chapter. I like that we are seeing more in Keira's relationship with Spike than just sex. There are a lot of directions this could go and I can't wait to see where you take it.
| Mitaya 2/8/12 . chapter 20
Been afk for ages. Finally able to tell you how avidly I'm still following this story. I'm so loving what you are doing with Spike. I said ages back that he and Keira were so good together I wasn't sure you could convince me Will was the one, but I wanted to tell you that you are definitely moving me in the right direction :)
Am in a "oh god, the angst, the agony, it's so wonderful" groove for the agony Keira's going through, and I absolutely love that line you gave Spike at the end of this last ch. Happy writing!
| Cinliz 2/8/12 . chapter 20
Love this! Really wondering where you are going with this story but so far! love it
| Tinkerpanda 2/5/12 . chapter 20
I was just thinking about how much I hoped you'd update this weekend. I liked this. Good elements, strong writing. The scene and the tensions in it definitely kept me reading and kept me entertained. The truth's unravelling on her, I get the feeling. Looks like she won't be able to maintain her distant and cold facade much longer.
I won't lie, I find myself more in camp Will. After everything he's endured for, with, and because of Keira I can't help but root for the guy. I have to hope they'll come to terms - they're in a right mess now.
| vguz04 2/5/12 . chapter 20
you know i like this chapter. And even with all the guy she slept with, i understand why she did it. But honestly i would love too see her falling in love with spike or at least end up with him. B/c sometimes as much as you want something or someone it not right. And i dont think her and will are right. I want him to know the truth, especially his cousin b/c she is a bitch, but i dont want him with her. cant wait for
| AuntMingy 2/5/12 . chapter 20
What an emotional chapter! I feel sorry for everyone (though the jury is out on Jess...that was just plain mean!) Got a feeling that Spike is going to figure everything out at some point...
| SecretKeeperForever 2/5/12 . chapter 20
| HappyDaysAreHereAgain 2/5/12 . chapter 20
Oh gosh... I love this story so freaking much. You are SUCH a good writer- Keira's character is amazingly devopped. I love it love it love it. Keep updatin'
| Harper Granger-Weasley 2/5/12 . chapter 20
Yay! Another chapter!
I'm glad to see someone is finally piecing a little bit of Keira's puzzle together. And I'm glad it's Spike. Even if nothing else happens between them (like I ALWAYS hope for :P) he's a great friend.