| Reviews for A Tale of Two Dots |
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Lady Babette 10/29/11 . chapter 1Love this so much. It was very sweet. Sevie is awesome. |
Shyfire 10/27/11 . chapter 1 First, let me say that I found this story very sweet. That's a compliment. One thing did bug me, though. "Hansom". A hansom is a type of carriage with two wheels. To describe a person's looks, you want "handsome", pronounced the exact same way. It's one thing for little Sevie (so cute!) to 'spell' it that way when talking; Harry's speech at least should have the proper spelling. Thanky you for the story and your time. |
Sanity and Katlin 10/17/11 . chapter 1Awww... That was just too cute! The only thing that could posibly make it better would be an epiloge of there family... even a short one. But of course you don't have to. Sanity |
egwolf65 10/15/11 . chapter 1sooo good! |
Valenti1965 9/19/11 . chapter 1Oh wow..great story...totally adored this one! x |
Rori Potter 9/7/11 . chapter 1Interesting story. |
KrissyNightwish17 9/2/11 . chapter 1I'm really impressed. Your story is so beautiful. You really have a talent in describing cute children. Just awesome and great. Thanks! |
darknessbleedingthroughmyveins 8/28/11 . chapter 1Loved it! |
Sliver of Melody 8/26/11 . chapter 1Totally awesome! |
kimmie837 8/13/11 . chapter 1awwwh ! flipping cute ! i love sevie ! he was so cute ! |
sm1982 8/5/11 . chapter 1Beautifully written. Keep up the great work. Would be great if this was a multi-chaptered fic. SM |
workingsomecoffeemagic 8/5/11 . chapter 1Aaawww, this was a pure joy to read! So sweet! |
scorpionika 8/4/11 . chapter 1Awwwww xD I mean, by my standards it all happened waaay too fast (my stadards lifelong friendship 5 to 10 years of living together before "I do" :) but, considering it's your snarry story - I love it . Hugs! |
SamHAS 8/2/11 . chapter 1Very sweet and unexpected. |
Angelpoppet 7/31/11 . chapter 1Awwwwww, just lovely. Sev/Harry is has been my fave since I started reading fanfiction and little Sevie was so cute :) |