Reviews for A Tale of Two Dots
Lady Babette 10/29/11 . chapter 1
Love this so much. It was very sweet. Sevie is awesome.
Shyfire 10/27/11 . chapter 1
First, let me say that I found this story very sweet. That's a compliment.

One thing did bug me, though. "Hansom". A hansom is a type of carriage with two wheels. To describe a person's looks, you want "handsome", pronounced the exact same way. It's one thing for little Sevie (so cute!) to 'spell' it that way when talking; Harry's speech at least should have the proper spelling.

Thanky you for the story and your time.
Sanity and Katlin 10/17/11 . chapter 1
Awww... That was just too cute!

The only thing that could posibly make it better would be an epiloge of there family... even a short one. But of course you don't have to.

Sanity
egwolf65 10/15/11 . chapter 1
sooo good!
Valenti1965 9/19/11 . chapter 1
Oh wow..great story...totally adored this one! x
Rori Potter 9/7/11 . chapter 1
Interesting story.
KrissyNightwish17 9/2/11 . chapter 1
I'm really impressed. Your story is so beautiful. You really have a talent in describing cute children. Just awesome and great. Thanks!
darknessbleedingthroughmyveins 8/28/11 . chapter 1
Loved it!
Sliver of Melody 8/26/11 . chapter 1
Totally awesome!
kimmie837 8/13/11 . chapter 1
awwwh ! flipping cute ! i love sevie ! he was so cute !
sm1982 8/5/11 . chapter 1
Beautifully written.

Keep up the great work.

Would be great if this was a multi-chaptered fic.

SM
workingsomecoffeemagic 8/5/11 . chapter 1
Aaawww, this was a pure joy to read! So sweet!
scorpionika 8/4/11 . chapter 1
Awwwww xD

I mean, by my standards it all happened waaay too fast (my stadards lifelong friendship 5 to 10 years of living together before "I do" :) but, considering it's your snarry story - I love it .

Hugs!
SamHAS 8/2/11 . chapter 1
Very sweet and unexpected.
Angelpoppet 7/31/11 . chapter 1
Awwwwww, just lovely. Sev/Harry is has been my fave since I started reading fanfiction and little Sevie was so cute :)
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