|Reviews for A Tale of Two Dots|
| Lady Babette 10/29/11 . chapter 1
Love this so much. It was very sweet. Sevie is awesome.
| Shyfire 10/27/11 . chapter 1
First, let me say that I found this story very sweet. That's a compliment.
One thing did bug me, though. "Hansom". A hansom is a type of carriage with two wheels. To describe a person's looks, you want "handsome", pronounced the exact same way. It's one thing for little Sevie (so cute!) to 'spell' it that way when talking; Harry's speech at least should have the proper spelling.
Thanky you for the story and your time.
| Sanity and Katlin 10/17/11 . chapter 1
Awww... That was just too cute!
The only thing that could posibly make it better would be an epiloge of there family... even a short one. But of course you don't have to.
| egwolf65 10/15/11 . chapter 1
| Valenti1965 9/19/11 . chapter 1
Oh wow..great story...totally adored this one! x
| Rori Potter 9/7/11 . chapter 1
| KrissyNightwish17 9/2/11 . chapter 1
I'm really impressed. Your story is so beautiful. You really have a talent in describing cute children. Just awesome and great. Thanks!
| darknessbleedingthroughmyveins 8/28/11 . chapter 1
| Sliver of Melody 8/26/11 . chapter 1
| kimmie837 8/13/11 . chapter 1
awwwh ! flipping cute ! i love sevie ! he was so cute !
| sm1982 8/5/11 . chapter 1
Keep up the great work.
Would be great if this was a multi-chaptered fic.
| workingsomecoffeemagic 8/5/11 . chapter 1
Aaawww, this was a pure joy to read! So sweet!
| scorpionika 8/4/11 . chapter 1
I mean, by my standards it all happened waaay too fast (my stadards lifelong friendship 5 to 10 years of living together before "I do" :) but, considering it's your snarry story - I love it .
| SamHAS 8/2/11 . chapter 1
Very sweet and unexpected.
| Angelpoppet 7/31/11 . chapter 1
Awwwwww, just lovely. Sev/Harry is has been my fave since I started reading fanfiction and little Sevie was so cute :)