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the Iron Duke
2004-08-31
ch 6, anon.
abuseI must say that even though I'm not to thrilled with some of the things that has happened in these fics, it is a good fic, and well written. Another good chapter you have here. Congratulations on Heero & Victoria's engagement/wedding. I hope they have many long, happy years together. Is Mariemaia going to make an appearane in the next chapter?

Actually, that should've been a special thanks from all of us for the usage of the name Victoria.
I personally believe that Relena is not the only one who is of royalty. I think, that Lady Une, Noin and Hilde are of royalty or rather of royal descent as well.

Keep up the good work.
Amscray
2004-08-28
ch 6, anon.
abuseAnother decent chapter. The dead zone? Must've gotten it from the tv show of the same name.
What, Yuy didn't pass out from shock? Well that shows that Yuy isn't a weakling. Congrats to Yuy on finally marrying Lady Une. Good choice, at least it isn't that annoying stalking onna.

Keep up the good work.

PS: How goes the fic In the End.
the Duke of Fenwick
2004-08-26
ch 6, anon.
abuseAnother good chapter. It's about time that Heero and Lady Une decide to tie the knot. I still say they should've done that a long time ago. Especially before Trowa knocked her up. Oh well.

Am still waiting for the gundam pilots to start singing Bohemian Rhapsody. Which I think would be rather funny.

Keep up the good work.

PS: Is the Wagner family by any chance related to Richard Wagner? The dude who gave use the Ride of the Val Kyrie with Brunhilde and her little friends. Later.
John Steppenwolf
2004-08-24
ch 6, anon.
abuseExcellent chapter. You know I don't know who I feel more sorry for. Lady Une because she has Duo as a brother or Duo who has Lady Une as a sister, Ames as a girlfriend and a mother who gets after him about various things.

Speaking of Duo's mother, I think Wu-man would like her, because she keeps the braided baka in line. Now what would be funny is if she chased after Duo with Wu-man's katana blade threatening to chop it off.

(In pops the Desert Fox)To author: Gracias for the usage of Victoria. Most of us think she looks more like a Victoria than an Anne. The Duke of Fenwick thinks she looks like a Anastasia while Amscray thinks she looks like a Nikki.

One last thing. You own the name Victoria? (scratches head) May have to look into that one.

Keep up the good work. Two down and three to go.
Devon Masterson-Bond
2004-08-21
ch 1,
abuseDesert Fox, sure you can use the name Victoria and in a way I own it. Most people use the name Anne, so feel free:)
the Desert Fox
2004-08-20
ch 6, anon.
abuseHooray! You've updated. Unfortunately, I forgot to check when you updated about 19-20 days ago. Yeesh.

So Heero and Victoria, finally are tying the knot. Go Heero. Doesn't Victoria have any older siblings? If she does are they going to be there?
Now that would be something. Older brothers, threatening Heero.

Now to tell the others. Keep up the good work.

PS: You're not twisted. Well, only with this fic.
Q: Do you also own the name Victoria? I'd like to borrow it/use it etc.
PPS: The Gundams belong to Sunrise? Though the were created by the genius, not to mention the father of the Gundams, Yoshiyuki Tomino.
Later.
Commander Bubbles
2004-04-13
ch 5,
abuseYou reviewed my story! I'm so honored! You're like, my favorite GW author of all time! and you should feel honored, you're the fifth reviewer! But anyway, keep updating! Come on, who ELSE puts Heero and Une together besidse me? PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY AND YOUR OTHER ONES!
you know who
2002-11-22
ch 5, anon.
abuseHey there.... where's the rest? Huh? It's gotta be lurking around somewhere. ~_^
John Steppenwolf
2002-11-02
ch 5, anon.
abuseAh, well it's been a boring week. Figured I read this story again. It's still a good story. You should put Mariemaia in this story. After all, in a way, she's Vicky's.... (a voice can be heard in the background)voice: hey dimwit, don't call her that, only Heero can. JS: Trowa did. voice: yeah, but look what happened to him. No wait it was Victoria, but still don't call her that. JS: fine. As I was saying, she's Lady Une's daughter.
I think. Well, keep up the good work. Hopefully, the others will stop in to see you.
the Duke of Fenwick
2002-08-21
ch 5, anon.
abuseHi, well since I screwed up and put the Desert Fox's name in last instead of mine, I figure I'd correct it. This is a good story. In all honesty, it was better than Bohemian Rhapsody.I like seeing some sort of action going on, like when Duo went and blew up a building or when the Gundam Boys and Lady Une went after the Domini in
your other fics. Congratulations to Heero & Victoria. So when's the wedding? keep up the good work.
HyDrA
2002-07-22
ch 5, anon.
abuseSorry I did'nt review much until recently. Despite this I've read most of your works and I must say you are a great writer. Keep up the great work!!!!!!! P.S.: I really enjoyed Bohemian Rhapsody ^_^
Ryoko-onee
2002-07-22
ch 5,
abuseThis is so beautiful. Oh yes! An odd couple indeed but I like it. A sexy side to Ami huh? Koolers! I'm still kinda confused about how this is situated but I dun care. I love it! Update soon!
the Iron Duke & friends
2002-07-22
ch 5, anon.
abuseIron Duke:Glad to have you back. It wasn't the same without you.Anyways, congrats to Heero on his first kid. the Desert Fox:Yay! you're back!I see that Vicky's expecting a kid. Amscray:Fox you baka don't call her that!Only Heero can call her that! Congrats to Heero. DF: chill A-man. You don't need to get upset about it. AM:FOX! How many times have I told you told call me A-man. DF: Sorry A-man. AM:PREPARE TO DIE FOX! (Amscray then draws out his katana. the Desert Fox yelps and runs away from Amscray) the Desert Fox: Well, I hope that Heero will get back together with Victoria. They make a nice couple. Congrats to Heero & Victoria. John Steppenwolf: Good to see you alive. I thought I'd have to get Victor Vacendak to get you back (he's from the movie Freejack) Anyways Congrats to Mr. and Mrs. Heero Yuy on the soon to be latest addition.

ID:Keep up the good work. (Walks away singing
"And so it was that later as the miller told his tale that her face at first just ghostly, turned a whiter shade of pale."
the Iron Duke
2002-06-05
ch 4, anon.
abuseOkay let's see. First things first. 1)Interesting story. As is Bohemian Raphsody.It would've been nice, if Heero had communicated to Lady Une, about his feelings in the first place or let her known in some way. oh well. (This is for BR)
2)Duo & Lady Une siblings? I honestly find that hard to believe. I suppose anything's possible.

My friend Amscray wanted me to tell you, that he thinks that the wedding etc. between Heero & Lady Une should be in this chapter. Bohemain Rapsody (Sp?) is long enough as it is. Besides, this would be a good place for them to confess how they feel to each other.
I would ask about if you are going to finish the other stories, so I won't. keep up the good work.
Later.
Devon M
2002-04-26
ch 4, anon.
abuseI found the fact that Quatre and Heero had the chance to dish it out was funny too;) I'm glad you liked the chapter as for Vic and Heero....now that Duo is back they can get married anytime. Hmm...should I make a movement 24 or put in one of the Confessions??? I have to think about it, b/c that is a big thing.
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