Great short NGblue. Very poignant. I love the imagery and the symbolism of the rain, and pools of regret, sorrow, and of missing someone. Really like the line: "Every day, every moment spent, is a reminder of your failure, and you know it's only matter of time before even the hopeful dreams will drown into the pool of your constant nightmares". Also liked "You don't know why the downpour surprises you as much as it does; though perhaps it's because only an arm's length away there's no sign of any of it ever falling. And when you extend one of your arms ever so slightly, the clouds above you expand as well, matching your movements in every way. It seems an almost unnecessary reminder of how you've spent your every waking moment."

Can't wait to read more from you. :) You're a great writer. Angsty as always but so good. ;)

It would be our stanatics wish to hear beckett tell castle these three words but guess what Mr marlowe has three little words for us NOT JUST YET! but we can hope right. Great story keep up the good work

Wow. That entire thing was beautifully written. The metaphor was wonderfully thought out and it just seems to fit. I'm a little fuzzy on the ending, (Did she wake up or not!) but that's probably just me and my lack of comprehension. :D Very well done.