I agree with another reviewer of yours, there defiantly should have been either prep time or lub, as without either it can be painful for the bottom of the pair. Otherwise it's a very good story and I did enjoy it. There's not enough Glades stories, straight or slash and there should be.

This was awesome! I love these two together!

*glee* i had a random thought that i thought they would be cute together and found this little gem...and even if i dont find anymore, ill be satisfied.

This was really really good. I am glad someone wrote a slash between these two, there is so much potential! :)

The only thing I had a problem with for this fic, was the lack of preparation. Anal penetration is painful without proper prep, and at first even uncomfortable. Without preparation it can cause tearing. Unless, Daniel was drunk off his rocker, he would have felt the pain, even as a seasoned bottom. And if he didn't at the time, not long after they finish, the pain would be felt unless they passed out.

If you don't want to include preparation, make sure to at least mention lubricant. Dry causes the friction to increase, while it can be pleasurable it again can also cause pain in the long run.

Next time, take a moment to at least mention either/or. You mention he might like it painful, but Jim should have asked to make sure, as he is the one who seems to have the most bearing of the situation.

That was really my only concern. Other than that I would rate this a 10 out of 10.

Please write more, there isn't enough Daniel/Jim fanfiction around, in fact this is the only one I have found. If you know of any if you can please let me know I'd greatly appreciate it.

Anyway, again great job!

Logicalgoth

"You do, don't you. Well go ahead. I won't tell anyone."

akwejhtjfklrwahfkd...I mean, I've always liked Daniel but, oooo I love how your write him! And YES! finally some slash for this show and it was so well written! awesome job, thank you for this.

About freakin time! I had almost given up on this fandom... hence the reason you're just now getting a review from me. Loved it and I wish more people would see it!

This was so great! I'm glad to know I'm not the only one in the world who has thought of these two. I occasionally check the archive to see if there are any stories on them and I was surprised tonight to see one. You should consider writing more, I really enjoyed it...well done, and thanks!

Wow there is like no slash for the Glades and yours was amazing! I never imagined this pairing but now that I have read I think I'm in love, lol. You should like write another chapter or at least another story! This is amazing!

I have on seen 'The Glades' but I love cop shows and slash.

I really like this and now I want to check out the show.

Sorry to see on your face book page you've had no reviews for this story, so I hope this one makes your day.