That's it? I want o know who these jerks think they are, taking my Raphael like that!

UPDATE!

Lenni

Ah, so now things are starting to heat up. I hope they can get Raph out of this with whatever plan they have. Nicely done thus far. I'll be patiently awaiting an update and hope that the muses will come for this story again. Great job.

The Bubbly One,

Shell

Whoa. That's not good. Well, at least Raph is still alive. I wonder who these mysterious men are if they aren't the Foot. I guess I'll find out in the next chapter. Nicely done.

The Bubbly One,

Shell

How nice it is to see the roles reversed and have Leo getting lectured by everyone else. At least he knows how it feels now. But not good on the end of this chapter. Looks like Don found Raph and Saki is somehow behind this. Nice job.

The Bubbly One,

Shell

Oooh, this doesn't sound good. Raph shouldn't have talked to Splinter that way. I'm guessing that Raph died in some way. I'm off to read more. Nicely done.

The Bubbly One,

Shell

Wow. Good beginning. At first I thought it was Leo talking until the last line. Nicely done. I'm off to read more.

The Bubbly One,

Shell

whats the plan? who are these people? why did you make it a cliff hanger? please update i have to find out what happens! this story is really good! :D

MORE! I WANT MORE NOW! I WANT IT NOW NOW NOW! GIMME! NEXT ONE! NEXT ONE! YOU BETTER RUN. Or write. Yes, I do think that I would prefer writing. Thanks!

Emma

Enough with the cliffys already! Jeez... JK.

Emma

AH! How dare you leave it there! Good thing you already posted the next one or I'd have to track you down. What was I saying about a situation? Oh, yeah, that it was just Raph. Um... I've been wrong before.

Emma

Oh, Now I'm understanding the situation. Raph is being Raph. Go figue.

Emma

This is a really good beginning. I loved how Mikey began it. I mean, nomally he's a goof but I think that the whole situation really sobered hm up. Now, to find out what the situation actually is...

Emma

Oh, come on! Seriously? I wanted to read the rest! I wanted to know WHICH one actually died. Argh, anyway, I really enjoyed reading it and would love to see an update sometime!

Please continue!

wicked.