Yay, heartwarming moments before the final battle! And now everyone's all caught up with each other's stories. And oh look, a title drop.

Oh boy, new chapter! And it seems like things are getting close to the end. And we've still got controlled!Boney running around and questions that need answers, like about Claus's clone. That last one was a big suprise.

And it's interesting that Kumatora has yet to use PSI and is also wondering about her place in things- and Lucas reassures her without even knowing about her worries. Aw, friendship.

I noticed a couple of typos and errors- at one point Paula was referred to as Mr. Polestar's 'dodder', for example, so you might want to go through and fix those, but other than the example I listed, none of them were really bad.

Looking to forward to reading more of this. I can't wait to see how it ends.

Poor Boney TT-TT

A Love the Story

Damn it! Damn that cliff hanger! Damn it all! Continue! Continue please! - roseal

(Pumps fist) Yes, update! And Kumatora has been rescued. Yay!

I'm enjoying your story so far(does dance of joy that Claus is alive). Though I do have to say that when Boney reappeared my reaction was "Drat it, I hate being right". Hopefully Kumatora won't wind up in a similar situation.

I'm enjoying Claus and Lucas adventuring together, and the Chosen Four too. And it's nice that Jeff and his dad are reunited. Waiting to see how it all turns out- hope everybody's reunited soon!

Good story so far. But ya no u uploaded the same chapter twice. Also the order of the story is throwing me a little. Ur English could also use some work. Spelling good, word choice leaves much to b desired though.

Nice update! I love seeing the chosen four, they're my fav group.

Nice story! I can't wait for the next chapter!