Aww, I'm sad to see this end! I practically never read angsty fics, but this has definitely been one of my favourites, quite likely because of the angst. I'm so so soooo glad Becker didn't kill Darren because, horrible as he is (Did I mention I hate Darren? :P), Becker isn't a murderer.

Your. Fic. Is. Awesome. :)

Oh my god, why have I not noticed this was updated until now? Stupid me. Silly, silly me. ESPECIALLY with that cliff hanger last chapter! Also, thank you for the mention, I promise to NEVER hit you. Lol. :)

ANYYWAY, this chapter: "my Jessica" - AWWWWW. :D (Grinning like an idiot here!), I loved the Conby with Becker's 'trump card' (the more ships in one chapter, the better, lol!), and I LOOOOVE Becker for being so determined. And you can totally notice the emotion in this chapter, and the love at the beginning is a nice contrast to the angst. :) AWESOME.

You updated!

:) :D :) :D.

Glad Becker and Jess finally admitted how they were feeling!

It's about time they did!

:) :D :) :D.

I'm sad it's the end but I enjoyed it looking forward to more of your stories and if they are as good as these then they are going to be epic!

:) :D :) :D :) :D :) :D.

I think you should definatly continue on from here, I wanna see Becker rkick his ass! Or to make it more intresting have Jess kick his ass! Either way I wanna see him pay for what he did to Jess... :) xxx

Continue :D

noooo! don't stop there keep going!

I'm loving this, I really want to see what happens in the end :)

Ellie x

Oh I am so hooked! and I know Conner Matt and Becker, especially Becker, will make Matt's 'future/actual time' look like paradise compared to what they will do to Darren...Lester will probably help them get away with it before they turn him in to the police...where Danny's old partner will personally take the case and make the bastard pay and once the bastard is out on parole 25 years later, assuming he doesn't get the needle, Lester will feed him to the mammoth or the Raptors since the Mammoth is a picky eater at times. O:D

Don't end it there!

We need to have Becker punch Darren!

And yay Jess woke up!

:) :D :) :D.

Absolutely amazing and very genuine Becker emotions.

I'd like to see if they do get Darren, even if in a sequel (though don't feel pressurised; do it if you have the ideas... preferably involving Becker, Darren and a EMD on high))

Loved reading this

xx

I think its good, however, I think you need to write more. Have Connor find him and Becker kill him. I really think you need to finish it and not leave it to our imagination.

I like it there. :)

But, I can see you making a good sequel out of Becker hunting down Darren...

Carry on writing this :D

It's amazing!

Please!

Beth xx

Please continue, I've really enjoyed your story. I think it would be good for Becker, Jess and the reader to have closure. Thanks again!

Gah! I've been waited ages for this and then you leave it there! You tease! It was good though.

And :( about your AS, hopefully that's all sorted now, if not; Good Luck, but I'm sure it'll sort itself soon enough.

Jess had better be alive...and Becker will make her better...*nods*