Yeah, that was kind of transitional.

Love Harry confronting the Merlin.

I would have thought that Luccio would have been more congenial to Harry.

Good job with the tension between Harry and Maggie.

Nice seeing Harry interact with the new guy.

Nice setup.

I love this! Yes please surprise us!

hope you will eventually continue this.

Great story. I can't wait for the next update.

Unfortunate, I was looking forward to more of this... oh well... I hope you get back to it someday. In the meantime, you've inspired me with ideas.

Sorry to hear that. I was really enjoying your story so far.

I liked this chapter; the tone was just right, and everyone seemed in character, in contrast to the last one where the Merlin was a little off. Can't wait to see what's next!

hehe i loved your harry molly interactions. really looking forward to the next chapter

"Oh, for Heaven's sake!" That exchange was priceless!

One small nit to pick; "Nonplussed" means upset or discombobulated. You seem to have used it to indicate the opposite.

Other than that, solid work and a nice addition to the story. I look forward to seeing what happens next!

hmm so dresden seems to have some winter knight powers left after all. update soon