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| snarky Beth 2008-02-10 ch 13, | abuseThis sequel was very good! So glad I found it. This was very sweet and at some times cute. I must admit, I felt a slight bit disturbed with two old people so intimate, perhaps I should hide with Severus? lol! Great job, I hope to see yet another sequel, you are an amazing writer and I enjoy your writing. Tell the creater that I found Lila Johnstone a very kind careing old woman and an excelant character. Great story! I enjoyed it vey much. |
| SpencerReid 2007-10-15 ch 2, | abuseUPDATE! awsome job I hope you update soon, happy writing. XD |
| Romulus 2006-12-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseWell, I hope the outing will not end in catastrophy! Just noticad that your stories definitely don't have the "little house in the prairie" taboo: no talking about toilets:) |
| Romulus 2006-12-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI imagine the poor professor would be rather puzzled:) |
| Lisa14 2006-10-08 ch 13, | abusei loved this story and the one before it, will you ever write another sequel or another fragile severus story? |
| cocoa-snape 2006-05-05 ch 13, | abuseI really enjoy your stories - primarily your H/C AD-SS interaction. They are always filled with humor and a great read. I admit I enjoy your angsty ones a bit more - where SS goes through something really tragic and is forced to confront it. I thought perhaps you'd do something after summer lessons?? It didn't seem like he had very much therapy with james. (PLEASE..hint hint) A couple of notes...first and foremost is my response to the oodles of "eww old people sex" comments. One day, you'll all be old and still wanting to have sex and then have to put up with stupid comments like that. I personally LOVED your addition of Lila in this (both for the romance) and even more so for her mothering of Severus. As everyone tells you, james is awesome. jeffrey too...but james especially...it's a great credit to you creating an original character people love. The only really sticking point with me for this story was that I found it very difficult to get past the idea that Severus would go anywhere (even to the bathroom) - let alone leave the country without his wand. But I suppose it was a necessary device for your plot. I also love the harry-severus bond you've developed here - it's awesome! SEQUEL! please...with angst preferably but i'll take anything i can get |
| Iva1201 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuseI can't remember ever laughing so much above a HP fanfiction before. Thanks for sharing! Hope you will have a couple of new ideas for your HP universe soon, I simply enjoy your Dumbledore-Snape stories. (-: By the way - I was a bit confused as this should be a sequel to A Promise to Be Better - it plays actually before the epilogue, does it? I have figured now. |
| TheDeathChamber 2005-07-15 ch 13, | abuseMarvelous. Simply wonderful. I just love your stories!! |
| excessivelyperky 2005-06-08 ch 13, | abuseAre you ever going to update any of your stories, she pleads? (bats eyelashes innocently, offers chocolate-dipped strawberries--good Oregon strawberries that have actual flavor to them, not those plastic California clones). |
| readersam 2004-02-09 ch 13, anon. | abuseReally enjoyed this AU story along with "A Promise to be Better". As in your other stories liked both Barnes characters and REALLY liked Headmaster Lila Johnstone. Know you are busy, but would enjoy any further stories in this AU "series". |
| Logospilgrim 2004-01-12 ch 13, | abuseI simply can't get enough of your fics :-) |
| Firestar038 2003-12-10 ch 1, | abusewow |
| Wynjara 2003-12-04 ch 13, | abuseThis is great, I love the relationships. It's hard to imagine Albus in a relationship, but you did it well and believebly. Yay! |
| Mikhyel 2003-11-04 ch 11, | abuse...I like Lila, I really do...But...EW! Old-people sex! I totally understand Sev's reaction to them...It's cute, and funny, but the details are somewhat squicky. |
| Miriamele 2003-07-08 ch 13, | abuseI haven't laughed so much in a long time!! I liked this at least as much as the prequil, if not more. Keep writing, you're wonderful! |