|Reviews for Kokua Ko'u Hoaloha|
| MarveyTibbsMcGarrettWilliams 3/17/13 . chapter 10
I love this.
| slashslut 1/7/12 . chapter 10
fantastic fic even tho there wasnt any slash-y goodness;)
| slashslut 1/7/12 . chapter 8
sweet *fist pump*!
| slashslut 1/7/12 . chapter 6
this is the best chapter yet! go steve! nothing warms my heart like seeing rachel NOT get her way!
| sweetteetwo 11/16/11 . chapter 10
enjoyed how real your character's seemed and how well written
the story is.I am glad that Danno got custody of his daughter
so please update when you can.
| daleaikman 11/12/11 . chapter 8
That was a great story. I love how you gave danny custody of grace. can't wait to read all of your other stories.
| loveRnB 10/27/11 . chapter 10
this story is bugging for a follow up. :)
| Jazmingirl 9/25/11 . chapter 10
loved this story
| francis2 8/13/11 . chapter 10
I thoroughly enjoyed this story and applaud Danny and Steve for finding the perfect daycare and a great arrangement for all of them. Grace is so lucky.
| francis2 8/13/11 . chapter 8
Wow! I didn't see that one coming. Not only did he get joint custody, he even turned the tables on her and got sole custody. She had it coming.
| francis2 8/13/11 . chapter 1
I like the story and hope Bill can help. I'm not sure moving in with Steve will impress the judges much, they could read all kinds of things into this move. But everything is better than the shitty little apartment.
| Kit Merlot 8/9/11 . chapter 10
A very nice ending. The daycare Grace will be going to after school and maybe on weekends seems like a great place and I like that Steve realizes that Stan's a victim of Rachel to and that he truly wants what is best for Grace.
| crokettsgirl 8/9/11 . chapter 10
The story was excellent and i'm so glad you added the few extra chapters in here. I loved this chapter and tying up the loose ends, showing Steve's soft side and how Grace knew Steve loved her. How things went at the day care. Also the talk with Steve being the guardian which I thought was really good think to put in along with the flash back. I thought this was one of the best chapters, I loved the other's but this had so much family and emotion and just loving way to it. And how Steve talks and handles Grace is wonderful and we all know that Danny is a terrific father...Brilliant job and looking foward to the next story that also has some of what happened here in it. I always like stories that maybe different but have the history of the main story it is like reading episodes...excellent choice...Sue
| alwaysateen 8/8/11 . chapter 10
Awesome ending. :)
So happy Grace found a great place where she feel safe to be while Danny and Steve are at work.
It's also very thoughtful of Danny to have think of Steve to be Grace second father in case something happen to him. She feel loved and safe with her Uncle Steve and he's amazing with kids, just thinking at how he was with Kevin give me chills. :)
| Effie17 8/8/11 . chapter 10
Great story, thank you for sharing it with us.