 TheMortician'sDaughter 2/28/12 . chapter 1Awwwwhhh awwwwssss awwwwwww that was really cute! I like how you kept her really in character and stuff with the way she speaks and what not, and the thing where they're looking at the dippers and what not reminds me of something they'd do after a case in a real episode or something, like that one freaky alien one where they're laying on top of the car... yeah, you know. XD
but that was really cuuuuute. I liked it. :D |