Wow, this was a really cool little piece. I liked how you got across so much with so few words. It was very vague-feeling, but I liked it. Keep up the great work!

This is phenomenal! I love that you choose to use just a few words that are laden with emotion and meaning. You don't overburden it with unnecessary explanation. It is more powerful because of the brevity.

Wow. That was so well done.

just wanted to review 'cause i favourited.. but really great.

Strong and beautiful. (Only I don't believe canon-Lily cared about him by fifth year. His near-death roused not even her curiosity, still less her concern.)

It's..kind of confusing?