omg i loved it!! you did such a great job keeping them and character especially the kissing part where 18 is ordering krillin to kiss her(but not in a mean way) i can deffinetly see her doing that. Awesome job! so cute!

I don't even care for Krillin/18 fics, but this one blew me out of the water. Great Job, I loved it. Super well-written, really interesting, and great characterization.

WOW is all i can mannage to say. WOW

you should definatly continue!

Terrific! You are one of my favorite authors on this site. You are just so talented, and it's obvious that you put a great deal of effort into all of your stories. I simply loved this, and I hope that you write more soon.

bravo!! bravo indeed... perhaps the best k/18 fic I've ever read... creative, original, everything an excellent fic should have. Well worht my time and I hope you will continue to write more ^_^

Brilliant! I luv the Krillin/18 pairing, and this one was definitely worth reading! Keep it up!

Dear C.S. Hayden,

AW 'WAI!

That is just like 18 too! It was perfect and romantic an I Loved it!

Stay safe
Stay healthy
Sincerely,
Starr

That was just so cyutte!

that was a good story.CAN YOU MAKE WHat happens next.I mean about maron and their weading.

I LIKED THIS FIC ALOT. IT WAS VERY GOOD. IT MADE ME THINK ALOT OF HOW MY G/F MELISSA REMINDS ME OF 18. I THOUGHT IT WAS VERY WELL DONE & SWEET. HOPE TO READ MORE LIKE THIS ONE.-LIP AKA JOSH AKA KRILLEN.

Nice.

Aw... that was sweet. I really enjoyed reading it. :) Really corny, though. But don't matter, I love corny stuff.

interesting...

the last "arguement," or whatever it was, was a little out of place -- it didn't seem as if Eighteen would have lashed out so quickly or bluntly, though she certainly would have questioned Krillin.

Other then that though, this was a cozy little short story, and since I'm about to go to sleep now, I want to thank you for putting me in a good mood for the night.

--ssjEasterBunny

cool is there going to be more? I hope so