Sweet story! (:

Nicely written.

heheheheheheh tough girl .and to imagine these things do happen hm. great job

While short, it was delivered very beautifully. As usual, your writing style is amazing. Hopefully, you'll write more soon (with a strong emphasis on soon)

It's more than alright.

It's great.

I liked that feeling of longing and lust that Sakura believes

can only be created from being apart.

You captured it very well,

and I'm glad that you're back.

This was a beautiful piece. It was more than all right.

Update soon

Short and beautiful.

Interesting. This seemed a bit different from your usual style. I would have liked a bit more resolution, but that clearly wasn't what you were going for, and I liked it all the same. Keep it up; you haven't gotten rusty.

YOU ARE BACKKKKKKKKK! you are seriously one of my favorite authors and just ugh, you write my favorite OTP beautifully

Wow...to say so much with so few words is just jaw-dropping. The conflict of Sakura's want and the reality of Sasuke was beautifully done-she'd schooled herself to live without him, so much so that being with him was overwhelming. But she can't stop the want. Just brilliant.

It is lovely to hear from you again. I am a little breathless from how wonderful I find this little piece. It's just...it's everything it should be.

Welcome back. :)

Annie

Nice and sad. Why didn't Saskura go home with him? Is there a back story as why she did not? She only got to see him 12 times a year. That's no fun for either one of them. It has been almost one year since you updated persuasion. Do you have any plans to update like really really really soon? I do hope so. Thank you for all your hard work. Until next time.

This is so lovely. So lovely. :)

Wow this is seems very angst-ridden. Sakura only wants him when he's absent? How terribly sad and complex. I would love to read more!