|Reviews for The Darkness in My Soul|
| Rainbow.Luna 8/5/11 . chapter 1
My proffesional opinion:
It's a good story so far. You need to fix all those spelling mistakes and some of the grammar problems in there. If you don't know which words are spelled wrongly then ask a friend or a parent to help you locate them.
| Sifaris 8/2/11 . chapter 2
This is such a dark and mysterious story. It really speaks to me, seeing as how I'm a dark and mysteriously unique teenager with quite a bit of inner conflict and sometimes I dream about killing others but feeling guilty about it later. :(
I hope that Noob manages to offblast after waking up from his asleep.