This is a really good story, very beautiful, please please please please update. Xxxx

Please update soon.

PLEASE WRITE MORE! you haven't updated in a really long time! I really want more PLEASE

I'm here!so sorry for my delay

I got back into the car that we 'barrowed'-hehe ;)

somehow we always ended up holding hands- not that I minded-soooooooo cute!

wife Jane-awwwwwwwww!

heaven, you two are obviously angels, so what's it like-oh,I really like Lucy!

they're just so damn cute!thank you so much!

"yeah how do you get kicked out of an open house?"-LMAO!

"You were worth the wait"-HOW AWESOME IS THAT?

lol,good dream.

update soon pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?

"yes she is"-awww,that's so sweet

"I don't know… Rube's a mystery"-true

she always sounded annoyed so maybe it was just her normal tone-she'll get used to

how would I it's not like I had a phone-lmao

"it's true, it was kind of adorable"-it is

they're so swet!

and didn't treat me like a fuck-up like the others did-true

I like that he calls her angel 's sweet!

MAson is super adorable!

I just found this story and let me say that I really like it!

Poor Mason,he deserves some was my fav series,too bad it was cancelled :(

Dare I gain the honor of being the first FF reviewer of someone's very first uploaded FF story? :D

I enjoyed reading this. I hope you'll write and upload more DLM stories. Of course I hope you continue this story as well. It's nice to see new blood so to speak, especially for my favorite show ever. I do love Mason centric stories, especially ones involving him and made-up character falling in love oddly enough (but who's complaining).

On a random slightly related note, I coincidentally happened to be listening to "Because It's Love" by The Kelly Family while reading this. That made a good story even better, I think. Oddly, I felt it fit now that I started thinking about it.

That said, I'll be awaiting (hopefully) more to come.