I was just re watching some of my favorite episodes today, and "Birthmark" was one of them, and I thought the exact thing. That's why I'm looking up slade and raven fanfics. I knew someone thought the same things as me

I completly agree with you on how it looked like Slade was about to rape her or something
-to make it worse I still remember the original airing of this episode, when I was about eight or nine believe it or not, gave me the ever-living creeps about Slade. And I didn't even really know what rape was when I was nine!

But now that I'm older, this was awesome! Great story and I'd be really interested to see your take on some more scenes from this arc. Like in "the prophecy" Slade is shown haunting Raven's meditation-room for possibility eh?

I think it'd be great if you continued this. I always thought Slade was a perv when he tore Raven's clothes like that.

You should continue this !

I definitely agree with your Author's Note, and I think you did the scene justice!

Great! Keep going!

I really like it. This is quite a good fic, and I like how you continued a really great episode into a totally plausible situation. :) You're a good writer, so keep it up.

LOVED IT. I really liked the whole Robin talking part, it gave it that extra touch! You're version was way better than the original!

As much as I like to read these kind of stories (raping is made, I just love a good angst story), I feel bad for Raven. She's been raped! DX

update soon

I could totally see this happening. This is weel thought out and very realistic. Slade seems that bad. I don't like rape but this is quite a fanfiction. Nice work

Whoa... That was really, really heavy...but amazing nonetheless! I actually thought about that when I saw this ep, too, but forgot about it till now! Gosh...so powerful, so tragic, so sad...but so moving! Loved every second of this! Rock on!

Yeah. When Slade started tearing her clothes off, I was like...ummm? Childrens show? Soo, I do think that you should continue this. I think that you should explore the parts that most people don't. Like, what happened after she woke up? She didn't just magicly appear back at the tower? She had to have gotten there somehow. And what did everyone else say when they saw her? Expesially Cyborg, cause as soon as he saw her, he would of been like, hell no! Because of how protective he is of her. And, how did they get down from the buildng? Because Raven was definitly too weak to use her powers or get down Physically. And I couldn't see her leting Robin carry her back to the tower without an argument or something. Soo, there are a few questions out of the many I have. Awesome start to the story, sooo glad I found it