HI the first poems format looks fimiliar. I had to do one in that format to. Yours is a lot better than mine. Your really good I hope you continue to write poems

Well... I'm not one to criticize poetry, but... It's ok, I wrote a similar poem to Frodo in 7th grade english, and I hated the format, I really prefer the ones that have a deeper meaning, rather than. "I am this" or "I am that" I dunno, that's just my feelings. Ok job I guess. Keep trying.

Aww. Those were good! I especially liked the last two. (I have really like reading stuff about Frodo and Sam's friendship...could you write more?...please?) The first was quite accurate about Frodo, the second was sweet, and the third was kind of touching. It just goes to show that being the ringbearer isn't easy (but then again, who thinks it IS?), and shows how homesick the hobbits can get (heck, I would; I go off to summer camp for a week and I practically forget what the rooms in my house look like o_O). Good job, and I hope to see more (Frodo and Sam) stories from you. ) Keep it up.