The quote's from the Little Prince, right? c: While the qoute from the english version of that story fits very well with this, the french one seems almost moreso, because in that, they do not say tamed, rather, they use a word that means 'to create bonds with' which is what Toria did with Ivanna, no?

Anyway, the story was very well written(it's always refreshing to read a good nyotalia fanfiction) and it wasn't disjointed. The end was so sad, though I can't say I didn't expect it. Please keep writing more awesome stories like this! X3

Daww.

At first, when I saw how everything was centered, I wasn't sure if I wanted to read it - but I'm glad I did. Usually, stories that are centered the whole way through aren't very good, but this was very well written.

I loved the way you wrote Ivanna's and Toria's relationship, because even without the Nyotalia-ization, most people see it as Russia taking advantage of Lithuania. It's sweet and refreshing to see a story that shows their relationship in an entirely different light.

I read the quote and I immediately thought of 'The Little Prince'.

Wow, that was... sweet. I've always loved these two, and it's nice to see a softer side to them both.

I personally didn't find it disjointed, though the wordiness in the beginning paragraphs kind of dragged for me. It picked up at the end, though, and that final line was a beautiful way to finish it.

Can I take a guess? Was it "The Little Prince"? Can I have ten points?