aww...cute!want more...bummer,i need to update mine stories..''tchau,gonna try to update them this week or next!

aw! kawaii!
i really liked this fic!

'Duo wa baka' sounds funny because it's missing the ending...it sounds fine if you add 'desu'...'Duo wa baka desu'. Actually, 'Duo no baka' is grammatically correct, though. It's different usage of the particle than is often seen, but it is correct. The particle 'no' doesn't just mean 'of' or 's like she said-it can also be used attributively to link a noun with a noun used as an adjective or an adjectival noun ('na' adjective) such as 'baka'. In this case in English we just normally place the one noun in front of the other, 'Duo idiot', meaning an idiot which is specifically identified as Duo. In Japanese there is a particle which shows the relationship, and it just happens to be the same one that is often used for 'of' or 's-but in this case, it's doing a different job. Enjoyed the story, it was cute!

Aw, sweet story!
Duo an' Heero are just to cute together!

Really good. There were a few pov changes in the first chapter where you switched from first to third person in the middle of a sentence. i liked how the secodn chapter was just heero retelling the story, but it would have been better if you didnt use the exact same words from the first chapter.

aw

that is so sweet...

my brains on slow down from writing right now... so i can't give this a very good review... but it's really sweet!

jasi

this is good and considering the fact that there aren't any good gwing fics aroung i have to say... o.k. btw i have updated

i liked it lots and lots!

ano...not to sound picky, but this is a really really big pet peeve of mine: you used "Duo NO baka" to put in a "'s" as in "Duo's an idiot", right? well..."no" is a possesive term, like "of" and the other "'s" so "Duo no baka" will trans into "Duo's idiot" or "idiot of Duo"...which doesn't really..er..fit the context. i suggest "wa" for the verb to be...;

sumimasen if i have offended you in any way, shape, or form...feel free to flame me if you are or just feel like it.

*snickers*i can't believe i can sound SERIOUS! but, no, i really am being sincere.

*looks back* - -' i talk waaaaaay too much

That was really, really sweet! I liked it!

Kawaii! I don't think of it as OOC but as Heero's softer side. Which is kind of an excuse but true. It was very cute and sappy, I enjoyed it muchly. .

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Awwww! That's so sweet! _ Great fic!

cool shrek :)...i liked it, sorta nice and gushy.