haha, this was awesome!

Please continue this :)

That was so funny I thought I would die! VERY original, and oh god the hilarity of it all! Thank you very much for writing this, and inmproving my mood like ten fold!

So god!I laughed my head off with this!Have you considered a sequel? This is brilliant and the couple very original!

gosh, its hilarious. i was half hoping its hisoka but this is even better. u're now on my fav. author list D

Hahaha, whoo! Go Oriya! XD! This was great! Please write more soon!

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ROTFLMFAO!

It was so OOC, but that didn't matter, cause it was FECKING HILARIOUS. I loved it! XD Keep up the great work!

Wow... i like the fact that u cpuld write bout Oriya and Muraki so well! Making them seem erm... less evil... It's hard to see it around here. Continue on ur gd work! Hope to see more of the sequel to Rude awakening! -Y

oh.i LOVE Oriya! and Tsuzuki! this is great!

I..really don't mean to sound rude. But why Oriya too?Didn't Tsuzuki have enough of being glomped by nearly 3/4ths of the guys in the series?. Why did you have to put him with *Oriya* as well,who has so much Tsuzuki-hating potential?. And yes, I dislike Tsuzuki. But this was well written.

Yeah!, very Funny, but...

I Love Muraki and I Love Oriya, and they really like me as a Couple!

Anyway, that was good, very good :)

(sorry for my English, but I am Chilean and I speak spanish)

...*smirks* That was bad... Funny, but oh-so-bad... .

i cannot stop laughing...that is so hilarious...i've never seen an oriya/tsuzuki before, but this is just such an awesome, awesome, hilarious story...

I was practically dying laughing! I love your fics! *grin*

*wipes tears* you write really fawny fics. I like your fics So cute and fawny. _

That was hysterical. I love how nervous Oriya was and his complete loss of composure (in typical style) had me covering my face to keep the laughter in. Even the OOCness of Tsuzuki is completely excused! Great piece.