btw, I loved the whole 'initiate order 66'.

Your charachter is a bit more deep and fun than vexmaster.

nice spin-off.

I like how 'alex' acted different from 'james'.

Plz don't make this story exactly the same, have 'alex' fight something else than orks, or change the numbers etc.

Anyway, looking forward to the next update.

interesting

Im really enjoying this man keep it up and good luck D

another fic kinda like this that is a favorite of mine has the id '6982984'

Very helpful summary by referring to another fic. Really helpful. You should win the Nobel Prize for Summary Writing for writing this excellent summary.

Interesting story though I did not like the death' of alex, The transistion just dosent fill right to me atleast but this is still one of my favorite stories in this area, I do hope to see more of it in the near future.

well done great chapter i cant wait to see what you evolve the leviathan into and to see what new evolutions you will bring into the fold. one quick question will the leviathan change into a trtan or just grow bigger so it can stand a chance againstthe other space fairing races? cause at he moment it wouldnt last a second against a space marine battle barge.

good story so far keep up the good work and i wonder what hey found and please work on other stories to please

Well I would like to see more of this. Would be interesting to see your spin on VexMaster's story. Your character seems to be a bit more sensible and genre-savvy than his so I suppose it could become a fun read.

While I'll be adding this to the alert list, please do something about your spelling and grammar. I normally don't mind much, but the sheer amount of mistakes is making the story frustrating to read. That would be such a shame, because I think you're on to something good. Just try not to rip off VexMaster too much.

excellent start really well done. the fact that you deviated so much in comparison to vexmasters story is a big plus for you as it leaves the future open to a possible crossover story like vex did in "Clash of Empires". on the one hand we have vex's 'swarm' developing using pre-set templates ie. upgrades to existing units bye cross spliciing DNA of other units banelings, broodlords, hydras and roaches. were you apear to have gone a different route with your 'brood' of splicing zergs with hybrids and protoss giving you both uniquely different army. i cant wait to see your brood start terrorizing the 40k universe and all upheaval you will cause on your way though.

Good chapter will this be anything like the swarm of war by the way I like the idea of combining the two hybrids what gave you the idea for that and update this soon