This review is actually for chapter 4, but due to no reviewing the same chapter twice, I reviewed the prologue.

"The Zombie looked at her. "I know." He said. "Nobody has ever heard of Lord Raptor."

Poor Raptor.

Forever alone. T_T

It's a Darkstalker party! Found some spelling errors that need fixed, but other then that it all looks good. Still waiting for you to get to work on the next chapter!

What a great story for your first try. Cant wait to read the rest. Please keep in touch.