|Reviews for Finding: Trust|
| Cinija Nicija 4/7/13 . chapter 12
The story is noce but the way you divide it into three archs and re-post things left and right is kind of...confusing. But I would like to see how it ends, certainly.
Awww, blind Edmund. Fluff levels goes up and up, doesn't it? ;-)
| lost-in-elysium 3/23/13 . chapter 12
I'm sad that the story has ended but I'm glad that another installation will be added. I knew you couldn't have ended off here! Even though it's the end of this story, it is the beginning of the other. I'm happy that everything turned out alright but I still feel that something bad might happen in the continuation of this. However, I might be wrong. I suppose I'll have to read to find out. :)
Congratulations on completing yet another great story. I'm looking forward to the next one!
| lost-in-elysium 3/23/13 . chapter 11
I think Tarik was brave because of what he did because he did go against what Tresa wanted, which was to avenge Jadis by killing Edmund. I wonder what caused Tarik's change of heart bu at least he gets a second chance. I like how Tarik is a traitor in a way, like Edmund, and how Edmund was able to forgive him and give him a second chance despite what he did. Edmund, and Tarik, were in similar positions, both exhibiting betrayal. Maybe Edmund was thinking about his own betrayal when he said that Tarik deserved a second chance.
| Hain degistirildi 3/19/13 . chapter 12
Lovely as always!
| narniadreamer1 3/18/13 . chapter 12
wouldnt that work if i went back and reviewed on all the other chapters right now? anyways that was great! im glad that its not over i wouldnt know what to do if it was :)
| Elfera 3/18/13 . chapter 12
That was a nice ending!
| Allie Danger 3/18/13 . chapter 12
Ooohhhhh, keep writinggg please :)
I loved this story :)
Poor ed, is he blind?
| MCH 3/18/13 . chapter 12
Like how you ended it not a happy ever after, I always say that Aslan lets things happen for a reason which ultimately helps those involved in the event. There are still things for Edmund Tumnus his siblings the Narnian and I think for Tarik to learn. Maybe even Aslan as well as the deeper magic can move in mystery way for us all.
Good your not finishes this story.
| MCH 3/18/13 . chapter 11
Wonder if it was Tarik who was hurting Edmund when he was in the witches prison?
Glad Tarik gets a second chance.
| CrazyDyslexicNerd 3/18/13 . chapter 12
Nicely set up. Many writers, professional as well as amateur, cannot figure out how to decently write a story in a way that allows for the next part of a larger arc, and finishes off a mini-arc of its own.
I really liked the ending. Ed's moment with Aslan at the end seemed to give this mini-arc an end, but the story still goes on.
| Allie Danger 3/6/13 . chapter 11
| bookchomper101 3/4/13 . chapter 11
oops, sorry, completely didn't realize that it wasn't enabled. heh heh heh. *blushes* now im embarassed.
Thanks for the advice, ive posted the first chapter of my story. If you want to read it, it's a crossover between hunger games and circle of magic.
I love what you did with tarik. It was awesome!
| CrazyDyslexicNerd 3/3/13 . chapter 11
Well, that was short and action packed, and I quite like how you wrote Tarik. He's very interesting and rather morally grey.
Also, I do believe we are seeing the beginnings of the Just king of Narnia!
| Elfera 3/3/13 . chapter 11
| lost-in-elysium 2/23/13 . chapter 10
I think what Tarik said at the end was really interesting about he was not 'sure' he was winning. I wonder what he necessarily meant. Did he start to realize that this war was unnecessary and wouldn't solve anything? I think when he looked at Edmund and saw how emotional he had become, Tarik somehow changed. Is he feeling sorry for him? Hmm...
I prefer option B. After reading this chapter, I don't think Tarik is as evil as we believed him to be. I think he, like everyone else, is capable of doing the right thing, just like Edmund has done.
Please update soon! :)