The story is noce but the way you divide it into three archs and re-post things left and right is kind of...confusing. But I would like to see how it ends, certainly.

Awww, blind Edmund. Fluff levels goes up and up, doesn't it? ;-)

I'm sad that the story has ended but I'm glad that another installation will be added. I knew you couldn't have ended off here! Even though it's the end of this story, it is the beginning of the other. I'm happy that everything turned out alright but I still feel that something bad might happen in the continuation of this. However, I might be wrong. I suppose I'll have to read to find out. :)

Congratulations on completing yet another great story. I'm looking forward to the next one!

I think Tarik was brave because of what he did because he did go against what Tresa wanted, which was to avenge Jadis by killing Edmund. I wonder what caused Tarik's change of heart bu at least he gets a second chance. I like how Tarik is a traitor in a way, like Edmund, and how Edmund was able to forgive him and give him a second chance despite what he did. Edmund, and Tarik, were in similar positions, both exhibiting betrayal. Maybe Edmund was thinking about his own betrayal when he said that Tarik deserved a second chance.

Lovely as always!

wouldnt that work if i went back and reviewed on all the other chapters right now? anyways that was great! im glad that its not over i wouldnt know what to do if it was :)

That was a nice ending!

Ooohhhhh, keep writinggg please :)
I loved this story :)
Poor ed, is he blind?

Like how you ended it not a happy ever after, I always say that Aslan lets things happen for a reason which ultimately helps those involved in the event. There are still things for Edmund Tumnus his siblings the Narnian and I think for Tarik to learn. Maybe even Aslan as well as the deeper magic can move in mystery way for us all.

Good your not finishes this story.

Wonder if it was Tarik who was hurting Edmund when he was in the witches prison?

Glad Tarik gets a second chance.

Nicely set up. Many writers, professional as well as amateur, cannot figure out how to decently write a story in a way that allows for the next part of a larger arc, and finishes off a mini-arc of its own.
I really liked the ending. Ed's moment with Aslan at the end seemed to give this mini-arc an end, but the story still goes on.
-Dyslexic Nerd

Keep writinggggggg!

oops, sorry, completely didn't realize that it wasn't enabled. heh heh heh. *blushes* now im embarassed.
Thanks for the advice, ive posted the first chapter of my story. If you want to read it, it's a crossover between hunger games and circle of magic.
I love what you did with tarik. It was awesome!

Well, that was short and action packed, and I quite like how you wrote Tarik. He's very interesting and rather morally grey.
Also, I do believe we are seeing the beginnings of the Just king of Narnia!
-Dyslexic Nerd

Yay rescue!

I think what Tarik said at the end was really interesting about he was not 'sure' he was winning. I wonder what he necessarily meant. Did he start to realize that this war was unnecessary and wouldn't solve anything? I think when he looked at Edmund and saw how emotional he had become, Tarik somehow changed. Is he feeling sorry for him? Hmm...

I prefer option B. After reading this chapter, I don't think Tarik is as evil as we believed him to be. I think he, like everyone else, is capable of doing the right thing, just like Edmund has done.

Please update soon! :)