This was wonderful poor little Mud, being hot by a car. I'm glad Remus stepped in and made sure she was buried properly. I feel bad, the one animal to actually like remus had to die. Really great story, very touching at rhe end

This was great! I REALLY liked this story. It was really sad, but really sweet at the same time. Bravo!

Aww... that so sweet yet sad... good job

You killed a puppy? What kind of sick, twisted person are you? ;) The story was wonderful, but it made me sad. I'm sending my spies after you to watch for new stories coming from you.

m_o_o_m He's watching you.

aw that was cute! that poor puppy though...kinda sad even if it never really happened haha. I like it and I also like how they don't know Remus is a werewolf yet...I think you could manage a good fan fic about remus telling them! why don't you give it a shot?

Oh man, you nearly made me cry! Great job! It was really sweet to see how Sirius reacted!

Very sweet. You wrote the young Marauders well. I loved it.

:) Very sweet. I'm also glad that you didn't bash Peter, but focused on the strength of the friendship between them all as it used to be. Mud's death was unexpected and sudden, and that it happened right after her reconciliation with Remus made it quite sad. That you were able to show Remus in a such a human and canine way was adorable.

I also really liked how you handled James's POV, particularly on how observant he can be. His embarrassment at the beginning, when he thought that Lupins must not have many luxuries, was my favorite. Correct but for the wrong reasons!

I enjoyed reading this. Thanks.

Michelle

aw

good job!

AW How sad! i admit that i cried when my dog died and my other dog was put to sleep, you just get attached to them, i feel their pain, this is great keep the stories coming you are a really talented author.

for your first time i think that this is an amazing piece. i lke the last paragraph in which james thoughts are relyaed.

i recently lost my dog and when reading this it made me think about her and how much sje menant to me and it makes me happier to hink that dhe didnt feel any pain when she went.

so sweet!

wow you're evil for killing a puppy but i don't hate you cuz you wrote this really well. :]

aww very sweet. Poor little Mud.

hmph. meany author...killing a puppy...*glares* *hugs author for writing so good*