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Imagenary26 5/30/12 . chapter 53
Wow... the story is becoming great I love it and also I can't believe it! did really renee kiss professor while she's drunk? But at least your story is going great and I love it. Pls. upload some more
lulubibi28 5/14/12 . chapter 53
It's a hot chapter! :please continue to write !
Weird1 4/25/12 . chapter 52
*-* thanks for the shoutout, means a lot.

Now, down to business, you nearly had me at the edge of my seat, I mean that literally, I mean, Renee's like right there, Snape is right there...so why not? But, I can wait, I see its worth to read about it.

Ps. Not to be rude, but this chapter there were more grammatical errors, in the past or present tense, it not something to freak about but juat a little thing to watch out for in the future.

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter, and I'll wait as long as it takes (but don't make it too long!).
Weird1 4/10/12 . chapter 51
As always, I review.

Oh dwar, I felt terrible for Renee, poor girl. But she's helping at least, loved this new side of the story (dark and dangerous)can't wait for the next chapter!
Weird1 3/31/12 . chapter 50
Yay! An update, I loved the part with Isabel and Sirius, I was just cracking up...please update soon. We need more Snape! Lol.
The Yoshinator 3/27/12 . chapter 49
This is a good fanfiction. You should continue it. By the way, I like how you prevented Sirius's death. I hate when he dies. Speaking of dead characters, please don't kill off Snape. Dumbledore either, but mostly Snape. Snape should have LIVED! *cries*
Weird1 3/25/12 . chapter 49
Yay an update, i've waited eagarly for this update.

Haha, and even if it was not intentional for that line that someone shouted, "he's gone with the woman in black," and they're talking abour arry, and its funny because daniel radcliffe plays the main character in the woman in black, anyways, I really enjoued reading this story, like always.

Update soon!
WillowEpiskey 2/28/12 . chapter 48
Wow, what an incredible chapter..I simply can not praise you enough on how well you did on this chapter. Not much of the lovely Potion's master but I will forgive you :) Brilliant cliffhanger and i'm both nervous and excited to read the next updated chapter.

Ps; was truly an honor to help :)
Weird1 2/26/12 . chapter 48
I don't know whether to call you a great author or a terrible one, I mean such a cliff hanger! Ugh,lol, no worries, it was awesome, I didn't even see Renee getting caught coming, when it just slammed into my face! Haha, please update soon, I bet it'll be a rather comical conversation when Renee tells Ron, Harry, and Hermione about all the time she's been spending with Severus.
Weird1 2/20/12 . chapter 47
Ysy, a snape/renee moment! Gret chapter, womder whats gonna happen or if its gonna be similar to the books. Update soon, thanks. Bye :)
WillowEpiskey 2/20/12 . chapter 47
Oh my! The scene when Renee and Severus in his private quarters..Aww! I couldn't help but feel sorry for Severus..am I the only one who had the sudden urge to want to hug him?

Finally Umbridge/the toad got her comeuppance, I couldn't help but laugh when you wrote that she fell on the floor.

In the words of Renee; "to hell with Umbridge" :)

Great Chapter :)
Anonymous 2/19/12 . chapter 1
Please work on your grammar!
InvalidData 2/19/12 . chapter 46
Ah this story is so amazing! I started reading yesterday and haven't stopped! It's very addictive, I can't seem to close the webpage .

I really hope you update soon, I can't wait to see how Snape and Renee's relationship progresses! 3
WillowEpiskey 2/18/12 . chapter 46
I was very intrigued buy this latest chapter, It was most definitely a Valentine's extra. I'm most curious to see where the next chapter leads but I must admit that Isabel and Sirius pairing was interesting. Neville also was a little bit of a shock but I must say that it does fit nicely and does rather make sense. Now to my favourite bit...Renee and Snape, I think you are doing marvellously with them, However I was a little gutted to not see Snape's 'Outtake' but I did quite enjoyed Renee's and I must say that I wouldn't dare disagree with her, not where Severus Snape is concerned.

Amazing Chapter and an even more amazing story.
Mistress Kisa 2/14/12 . chapter 17
I likethe story but the grammar problems are a bit distracting. You might want to think about having someone else tea over your story and fix he problems for you. Otherwise I like it
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