Like the bit with Demetri being Aro's son and the fire ball suits very nicely too. :D

Thanks!

Wait! Demitri is Aro's son? Hahaha-darn near perfect. The "raised finger" so appropriate to DaddyC's demise! Well done wickedness!

I'm also following Offside :)

Let me know if you need any help with your Italian,

all the best,

Raum from Italy

Interesting twist with the Aro/Demitri connection ;)

Very nice. Thank you.

well, I like this story better than the one with just the parents, just because I liked hearing Edward's POV of the events! ;)

This was nice closure for Edward - a calm ending. Now he's free!

Thanx for the fun read!

I like how they interweave with each other. It seems to me that Carlisle does not deserve any sympathy from Edward. I'm not sure which I prefer- a difficult choice. Perhaps the 1st one, for all the drama?

I enjoy reading your style of writing. Let me know if I can do anything else for you. You can send your fics to underfictionated (underfictionate on twitter) and we will pimp them for you. I hope that helps :)

Loved it!

What a happy ending! ;) Very well written. Good luck with the contest.

I liked the second one from Edward's side of it...now he truly understood what his dad was, and he could truly be free!

Thanks, bb...great job!

xoSus

I'm thinking I like this one more than the other one. I guess cause Bella and Edward are together and Edward states that he is free, which he is now.

I guess I liked this version better... but if you asked why, I wouldn't know. Gut feeling...

giant case of Karma all round...:)

In the dirt you go, Daddy C! You Asshole! Lol

Love it when E calls her Rumple. :)