I love Serena and Darien drabbles, but I've never seen a story centering around a common theme before, and I think this fic is brilliant. Much Ado is one of my favorite episodes in the anime because there's so much passage of time in that episode and so many interactions between our favorite couple that it actually allows them to grow close and develop a real relationship. You can see in the anime that Darien actually doesn't mind Serena's help, and that he even feels something for her, but isn't sure what. And of course, Serena loves Darien, but finally starts to feel like they're friends or even more in this episode. They even lose themselves for a moment towards the end when they celebrate Jordan's learning how to speak. Anyway, I love the idea that there were even more moments between them when all of that was happening because so much can happen when you're spending so much time taking care of a child together, way more than a twenty minute episode can accurately portray. You write Serena and Darien so well that I feel like I'm reliving and rewatching that episode. Actually, I have a huge urge to watch it right now. Please continue this! I absolutely love them, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next! Great job!

So cute I just love baby Jordan please update more

I had saved this story after the first chapter and didn't realize that it had more chapters. I usually hate reading stories from a guy's POV (i.e. from Darien's POV in this case) because they never sound realistic. Not in this case! You did a great job capturing Darien's personality and portraying his POV to be realistic. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter from where this left off!

Yu are one cold guy Darien Shields. One cold guy. SMH.

Marvelous drabbles

I like. Normally I hate first persons, but always give them a chance and read the first chapter, I glad I did with yours. Its well done. I like where its going. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I was excited to see an update and this chapter did not disappoint. Great character interaction, nice inner dialogue - looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Great chapter!

Loved this one! Hope he makes up for all the thing he's done to Serena.

I liked very much the characterization, and the story is very interesting, specially Darie's mixed feelings.

Keep going!

Kyaa! A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! Seriously. hehe,for a high-class gentleman Mamoru has some dirty thoughts there ;p PLEASE don't stop writing, your stories really bring out the sadness that Usagi feels during the 2nd season. Your stories are truly inspirational, so please don't stop. I'll be rooting for you!

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Raquelle

its great so far keep going

continue!

cant wait for more

Good for Sere to keep track of things!

"To make things worse I didn't even know how much a baby could defecate in one night. I had to check the baby book Ami gave me to make sure he wasn't abnormal about it."-lol, yup that is their only job

Love the hair bit, remember grandparents!

Yup, Sere did rub a bit off him, less sarcasm I see and he is getting used to them. Also, Sere's bit about the walking was way too cute.

Awe, he wants to block her smile from others *tear*

"practice for the future" huh? hmm how much does she know?