Well he's a dick. That's a low blow and truly a dick move. Though considering he is a jealous ex I wouldn't expect more from him. But what does the spell do? Or is it considered a curse?

Is it slowly going to kill her? Or maybe alter her in some form? Like make her evil by brainwashing her?

I like the combo punch at the end though I was satisfied by the act.

I'd love if you'd turn this into a Dave/Charley fanfic...

I. Love. Your. Plots!

pooh, it didn't let me sign in, so the last comment was mine, just not signed by me. Just got it working. But yea great chapter again!

I like the life lesson at the end. Its true, you can be surrounded by friends, but the amount you can count on to have your back is most likely less than half of them.

I can not wait for the confrontation scene. He's going to be all, "why isn't this working, you said it would work." or, "It worked last time." or something around those lines. And then Charlie will be all, "I'm a sorceress bitch." And then pow, hit him with a spell.

Most likely it will not actually be that dialogue but yea. Can't wait *cheshire grin*

WIN!

I like the fact magical items can't work on other sorcessors. Isn't he going to be in for a nasty surprise when he realizes she isn't some weak girl he thought she was. I'm looking forward to that actually.

Whens the next update?

Well I'm glad I could help inspire you. Though I think that asshole has something coming to him if he thinks she's the same girl he used to know. Unless he places a spell on her, but Kaleros will probably sense that. Unless he gets taken out and the teacher replaces herself as him. Which means she would have to know a bit about him so maybe there's history there? Sorry went on a tangent there.

Anyway, hopefully their make out session doesn't get cut short!

Yea I have a feeling he's either overreacting or that the guy is trouble. Maybe he's a Morganian? I wish I could see the piece for real. And Dave should ask Kaleros who he is, maybe he knows him?

That is actually a great metaphor for the dresses. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for them. Maybe Becky's revenge? Or an old flame of Charley's?

I like your story! Update soon!

I love your story! Update soon!

They should have to wear show girl outfits to training!

He has some poor pick up lines. But I loved them. Too bad I can't find a guy like Dave. Oh well, I wonder what the two Masters will have to wear now that the bet is over.