   LanceIsHot 3/8/10 . chapter 1Can I just say that it really bothers me that this has never been finished? I've had to use my horrible imagination to guess what you were going to do, and I'm guessing you had something better planned. So... could you get working please? |
| Forsaken Light 11/25/03 . chapter 3 Poor Banksie. Make him feel better soon please. Great story! Kieep it up! |
| melodie 5/8/03 . chapter 3 please continue. it's really good. poor adam |
| laney 11/23/02 . chapter 3 ooooh, what happens? write more! i love it ) |
| Digital Tempest 4/23/02 . chapter 2 I thought I reviewed this, but I guess not. I'm enjoying this story a lot, and I hope to see more soon. |
| Joyful 4/23/02 . chapter 2 Poor Adam! |
| melodie 4/22/02 . chapter 2 please continue. it's really good. |
| Icebox 4/22/02 . chapter 2 WRITE MORE SOON! |
| Black Laramie 4/22/02 . chapter 2 Hurry up! And please write a bit more detail, and longer chapters. I'd also like to see a bit of Varsity's reasonings about this whole thing. yet...i'm totally absorbed, please write more! |
| Icebox 4/17/02 . chapter 1 Need more! Need more! |
| saimone 4/16/02 . chapter 1 Great start...cant wait to see what will happen next! |
| Hi-I'm-New 4/16/02 . chapter 1 no don't turn it into a humor story. leave it angst and drama. |
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