I want Jane and Grayson to end up together as well, I dislike all of Jane's other boyfriends/lovers. This was sweet. I liked it.

keep going with the story! it leaves us hanging. please add to it.

Hey! Great story. I really want Jane and Grayson to be together. But like your story said, Grayson has to fall in love with Jane. He does have feelings for her, he knows there's something about her that he can't figure out. Maybe deep down, he feels it's Deb.

Thanks for sharing.

Anna